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When a dream you have had for many years
in reality, has Finally come true
And the one, you have been so in love with
is Finally there with you

The love that you both have had
having grown day by day
Has brought you both together
Finally finding its way

Sometimes in life, a dream comes true
and life becomes a joy
How wonderful it has become
for this lonesome girl and boy

You can Finally go through life
with your lover by your side
Never again worrying about
the feelings you had to hide

The magic you two have
puts electricity in the air
People all around you
can only stop and stare

Envy in their eyes
at such a beautiful sight
The life that the two of you now have
has become a pure delight
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Finally

Contributed by Bruce on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Finally

When a dream you have had for many years
in reality, has Finally come true
And the one, you have been so in love with
is Finally there with you

The love that you both have had
having grown day by day
Has brought you both together
Finally finding its way

Sometimes in life, a dream comes true
and life becomes a joy
How wonderful it has become
for this lonesome girl and boy

You can Finally go through life
with your lover by your side
Never again worrying about
the feelings you had to hide

The magic you two have
puts electricity in the air
People all around you
can only stop and stare

Envy in their eyes
at such a beautiful sight
The life that the two of you now have
has become a pure delight

Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2005-10-02 05:12:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 06:21:15 AM AEST
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such a sweet poem bruce
keep it up
well done
luv
jenni
xxx

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 06:40:16 AM AEST
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Incredibly beautifull write.
One can feel your joy.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 07:07:48 AM AEST
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what a splendid couple....not many are like that enough...your write shows that it is ...possible
con9i

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by anangel_1593 on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:37:10 PM AEST
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This is so sweet and tender... it should be in a song! Great write, keep it up.. Ciao,

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by anangel_1593 on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:37:40 PM AEST
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This is so sweet and tender... it should be in a song! Great write, keep it up.. Ciao

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:58:14 PM AEST
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Bruce this is lovely.It sure is a wonderful feeeling to find your soul mate and you have captured such a feeling, Ros

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:25:28 AM AEST
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A beautifully written poem u have here Bruce. Love pours out through the verses. Sue *sighs* some people are just lucky I guess. A great enjoyable write. Thanks for sharing it.
*hugs*
Sue, ED.

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:27:44 AM AEST
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ah......sweet rapture. Bruce, this was lovely and such a delight to read.
I especially liked the second last stanza,
"the magic you two have puts electricity in the air
People all around you can only stop and stare"
wow, I mean, just wow. Such a touching and heartwarming creation.
Lucky, lucky girl !!

~Breezy
(who is very glad she dropped in....)

Re: Finally (User Rating: 1 )
by thedreamfairyalways on Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:41:34 PM AEST
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magical! please write more like this! almost like being there.

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