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[aid] => mick
[title] => DON'T THROW ROCKS!
[time] => 2005-10-02 01:08:53
[hometext] => jus rantin
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You use to build me up
Never to tare me down.
Always brought happy smiles.
Never made me wonna frown.
Darlin, you've certainly changed.
Not in a very good way.
Don't throw rocks at me.
None are perfect, hey!
Change is a good thing
If one strieves to do better.
We shouldn't run arround
with our minds in gutter.
Now I don't pretend to
Be perfect, no righteous saint.
Things you said to me
I most definently ain't!
My life ain't no bowel of cherries
But happiness lives inside.
No matter what comes around
In luv I do respectufully reside.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 239
[topic] => 34
[informant] => emystar
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[alanguage] => english
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[score] => 34
[ratings] => 7
[editpoem] => 1
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DON'T THROW ROCKS!
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:08:53 AM in AEST
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SultryRose's Signatures
You use to build me up
Never to tare me down.
Always brought happy smiles.
Never made me wonna frown.
Darlin, you've certainly changed.
Not in a very good way.
Don't throw rocks at me.
None are perfect, hey!
Change is a good thing
If one strieves to do better.
We shouldn't run arround
with our minds in gutter.
Now I don't pretend to
Be perfect, no righteous saint.
Things you said to me
I most definently ain't!
My life ain't no bowel of cherries
But happiness lives inside.
No matter what comes around
In luv I do respectufully reside.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2005-10-02 01:08:53]
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by kerrah681 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:43:20 AM AEST
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| Cute, it kinda reminded me of my Dad, with the slang words like, aint and darlin, hes from the midwest, so anyway, adorable, I think it portrays the way you feel by using the slang, I enjoyed it thanks for sharing... |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:08:03 AM AEST
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It's always hard when relationships sour, that's why I loved the last stanza. It shows you have your priorities in order. Great write!!!
peace and hugs my friend, john |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:21:09 AM AEST
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another masterpeice
tasha |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 09:42:29 AM AEST
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woe sounds deep
Rant away girl.
awsome write
hugs |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:24:41 AM AEST
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so sweet
always looking on the bright side of things
well done |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:10:37 PM AEST
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Always looking on the positive side..that's my grrl!! I love this write..... Keep it up my friend..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:40:24 PM AEST
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Rant away...tell it like it is: )
This makes me think of the type of person who isn't happy with themselves, so they feel they have to belittle others, just to feel good about their self image. I like that ending. Good job!
Scorp. |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by anangel_1593 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:34:01 PM AEST
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This is definitely the poem of an optimist. I can tell through this poem that you're tough and you can love and let go easily. Congrats. Ciao,
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:03:46 PM AEST
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"jus rantin" ?
Well, it certainly is a well expressed beautifully written rant....full of strong emotion. Loved reading it.
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
:)
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:14:05 PM AEST
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Spoken like a true romantic, well done emy.
((((emy))))
Ben
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 07:27:33 AM AEST
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May your happiness inside never go away.
Take care.
David |
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 05:54:38 PM AEST
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Sweet poem.. how you end it in so much love as you are..yes, give out your love no matter...
my parents taught me .. several things.. the best one lesson.. learned.. is to love...show love, be loved..
no, instead of always saying sorry... show them by actions, is how they taught.. me.
happiness lives inside of me too Emy.. His name is Jesus..
my life may never be a bowl of cherries, cause i keep putting them in a pie lol.
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Re: DON'T THROW ROCKS!
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:10:39 PM AEST
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Don't worry i won't throw rocks at you, I think you are a nice person.
Someone once said "If you are pointing a finger at someone don't forget that 3 are pointing back at you"
Thanks for the reminder. |
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