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Array ( [sid] => 106874 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => waiting for what i can't have [time] => 2005-10-01 13:08:01 [hometext] => i want what i can't have [bodytext] => Tell me
how much longer must i wait for you to be mine
how much longer must i wait for you to notice me standing in the pouring rain
needing your shelter
your care
that warm feeling that is to be loved by one you love so dear
you see
it's not enough to just see you
every now and again
not enough to share a moment with you
that will eventually come to an end and i'll walk away dissatisfied
because i know we're just
friends...
when will that time come when we realize that this is just a game
we know we love each other
so lets end the game
and let our lives begin
why do i torture myself this way
thinking of these delusions of misoncepted love
torturing myself day after day
by convincing myself that these thoughts of perplexion are simple everyday perceptions
maybe this isn't a game for you
maybe your games have long ended
and im stuck sitting here in the frozen scene of the pause button
so tell me
how much longer must i wait for something i want so bad
that thought of misconcepted love
in my mind is all i have
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 2 [informant] => worldsenigma [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
waiting for what i can't have

Contributed by worldsenigma on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:08:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Tell me
how much longer must i wait for you to be mine
how much longer must i wait for you to notice me standing in the pouring rain
needing your shelter
your care
that warm feeling that is to be loved by one you love so dear
you see
it's not enough to just see you
every now and again
not enough to share a moment with you
that will eventually come to an end and i'll walk away dissatisfied
because i know we're just
friends...
when will that time come when we realize that this is just a game
we know we love each other
so lets end the game
and let our lives begin
why do i torture myself this way
thinking of these delusions of misoncepted love
torturing myself day after day
by convincing myself that these thoughts of perplexion are simple everyday perceptions
maybe this isn't a game for you
maybe your games have long ended
and im stuck sitting here in the frozen scene of the pause button
so tell me
how much longer must i wait for something i want so bad
that thought of misconcepted love
in my mind is all i have




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Re: waiting for what i can't have (User Rating: 1 )
by PrincessJen on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:18:18 PM AEST
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You capture yourself very well. I have felt this way before....It really sucks....Don't lose too much sleep over it though..If things don't work out...they're losing out...good luck


Re: waiting for what i can't have (User Rating: 1 )
by Artemis03 on Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 09:50:38 PM AEST
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::tears up::........wow... :-/.....just.... omg


Re: waiting for what i can't have (User Rating: 1 )
by aegurly on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 07:23:57 PM AEST
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you must really like who you keep writing about keep tryin'
I'm feelin' the same way right now but I'm not giving up I 'm
almost getting him back!!!!!! DONT GIVE UP




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