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Array ( [sid] => 106867 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Golden Tears~! [time] => 2005-10-01 11:06:27 [hometext] => fairy tale with happy ending..........? [bodytext] => There, once was a fair maiden, in a land that was full of Gold
She had everything she wished for, yet the most precious that was untold
Everything around, was always in place
Seemed it put wonderful smiles, upon everyones face
The King and Queen were the parents of thee
For she was a princess now, and always would be
The people in the land, thought she was happy as could see
In reality, the Princess just made them feel a flowing of glee
For the one thing that she had wished for that was the most
Would never happen for thee as long as she was on her post
She knew deep in the heart that she soon must depart
For; in a far away land was the wish of thee sweetheart
He was the one who could give so much more
It wasn't precious gifts and gold to adore
The honest and truth of the endearing heart
Is what thee Princess wished for and nothing apart [comments] => 8 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 40 [informant] => brew [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
Golden Tears~!

Contributed by brew on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:06:27 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



There, once was a fair maiden, in a land that was full of Gold
She had everything she wished for, yet the most precious that was untold
Everything around, was always in place
Seemed it put wonderful smiles, upon everyones face
The King and Queen were the parents of thee
For she was a princess now, and always would be
The people in the land, thought she was happy as could see
In reality, the Princess just made them feel a flowing of glee
For the one thing that she had wished for that was the most
Would never happen for thee as long as she was on her post
She knew deep in the heart that she soon must depart
For; in a far away land was the wish of thee sweetheart
He was the one who could give so much more
It wasn't precious gifts and gold to adore
The honest and truth of the endearing heart
Is what thee Princess wished for and nothing apart




Copyright © brew ... [ 2005-10-01 11:06:27]
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Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:29:49 AM AEST
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So did she find it?


Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by rie on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:36:57 AM AEST
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ahhhh nice poem
love at it's best.
we hope it will last


Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:45:04 AM AEST
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This is good.;

"Someone to miss
Some one to kiss
When you're away
to feel for me today
to be loved
to be loved
oh what a feeling to be loved"

Quote from "To be loved" by Jackie Wilson


Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:46:46 PM AEST
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may she find that which she dreams of. nice write.
thanks for sharing


Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 05:32:02 PM AEST
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Awww, very nicely expressed hopes in this write Brew. As they say, money can't buy happiness. I hope the princess finds her prince, to make her heart soar: )

Good job.


Scorp.


Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 05:48:31 PM AEST
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This is lovely brew deffinately stirs the imagination and sweeps ones heart away . . .

Ben


Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 07:09:36 PM AEST
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Ahhhhh, such sweet sentiment. A truely lovely poem Brew.
So heartfelt and endearing...

~Breezy


Re: Golden Tears~! (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:47:07 AM AEST
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A great write with a great ending!!!!! And as Remote asked - did she find it????????

peace and hugs, john




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