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Array ( [sid] => 106866 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tell Me You'll Leave [time] => 2005-10-01 10:33:30 [hometext] => *sigh* [bodytext] => Don't let me down
Just let me be
I want you to see
what you're doing to me

I never understood you
and all the things you do
I hated to love you
and the love hurt me too

so tell me you'll leave
I can't do this anymore
or tell me you love me
because I feel unsure

I didn't want you to go
but your love didn't show
when I just needed to know
that you loved me so
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Tell Me You'll Leave

Contributed by tres_estrellas on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:33:30 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Don't let me down
Just let me be
I want you to see
what you're doing to me

I never understood you
and all the things you do
I hated to love you
and the love hurt me too

so tell me you'll leave
I can't do this anymore
or tell me you love me
because I feel unsure

I didn't want you to go
but your love didn't show
when I just needed to know
that you loved me so

Copyright © tres_estrellas ... [ 2005-10-01 10:33:30]
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Re: Tell Me You'll Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:25:16 PM AEST
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Love-- you can't live with it, can't live without it. You did a great job putting those crazy emotions into words. You feel so hopeless and out of control when you are going through it.

Ann

Re: Tell Me You'll Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:30:32 AM AEST
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i understand, good write,,
tasha

Re: Tell Me You'll Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by justkevi on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:15:32 AM AEST
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The concept of hating loving, where you love, but you loathe the fact that you feel those emotions, is awesome. Good job demonstrating.

Often, the world trial is uncertainty.

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