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Array ( [sid] => 106852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Can't wake up [time] => 2005-10-01 00:12:12 [hometext] => From my heart...the one I love and can't have.. [bodytext] => Can't wake up,
I'm lost in my head,
you've killed me inside
I cannot handle love,
it is too much for me to take,
I've told you that
I cant breathe,
I'm dead inside,
yet all my thoughts are on you
When you love somone you can't let go,
when you really love someone you can'y just be friends,
when you love that person you can't say goodbye
You gave me love,
something I've never had before,
you can't just leave me
If I can't have you,
it's best I stay away,
stay away from this place
I love you so much,
it hurts,
it's killing me
I WANT TO SCREAM IT IN YOUR EAR SO YOU CAN HEAR ME CLEARLY,
I need you,
I cannot live without [comments] => 4 [counter] => 260 [topic] => 43 [informant] => HiddenDeath999 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Can't wake up

Contributed by HiddenDeath999 on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Can't wake up,
I'm lost in my head,
you've killed me inside
I cannot handle love,
it is too much for me to take,
I've told you that
I cant breathe,
I'm dead inside,
yet all my thoughts are on you
When you love somone you can't let go,
when you really love someone you can'y just be friends,
when you love that person you can't say goodbye
You gave me love,
something I've never had before,
you can't just leave me
If I can't have you,
it's best I stay away,
stay away from this place
I love you so much,
it hurts,
it's killing me
I WANT TO SCREAM IT IN YOUR EAR SO YOU CAN HEAR ME CLEARLY,
I need you,
I cannot live without

Copyright © HiddenDeath999 ... [ 2005-10-01 00:12:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Can't wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:33:29 AM AEST
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Just say it to the person already! LOUD WORDS can not be read only spoken. Good write

Re: Can't wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:14:18 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Can't wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by judasman on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:59:18 AM AEST
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got the idea running around in my head that its you who's stopping you having the one you love. may very well be wrong. but good write anyway

Re: Can't wake up (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:49:46 AM AEST
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Agreed with Archie, Tell them....maybe they will see, and then again maybe they wont.! Got to be told........well penned tho.

Brew~

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