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But its fragrance is an untold story
Like the wings of a beautiful new dove
Never recognized for songs of praise and glory
So life is a big whirlwind of emptiness
Love is the one thing you want to caress
In a world of upside downs
Let love be the one in which you drown

The wind blows and the leaf falls
Only to be stepped upon in a hurry
That very tree will grow so tall
But in a moment be gone in a blustery flurry
Swimming to a heart that calls your name
Wanting, needing love to burn like flames
Open arms to grab a hold
Finding this world of whirls has taken love to be sold


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World of Whirls

Contributed by allowanceofthoughts on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:06:03 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



A rose’s beauty is unspoken of
But its fragrance is an untold story
Like the wings of a beautiful new dove
Never recognized for songs of praise and glory
So life is a big whirlwind of emptiness
Love is the one thing you want to caress
In a world of upside downs
Let love be the one in which you drown

The wind blows and the leaf falls
Only to be stepped upon in a hurry
That very tree will grow so tall
But in a moment be gone in a blustery flurry
Swimming to a heart that calls your name
Wanting, needing love to burn like flames
Open arms to grab a hold
Finding this world of whirls has taken love to be sold






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Re: World of Whirls (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:09:24 PM AEST
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wow its so strange that no one comments anymore but it was a great write i really enjoyed it keep up the great writes




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