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Array ( [sid] => 106772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hatred Pure [time] => 2005-09-29 23:05:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't want to look in the mirror
Because I don't feel like bleeding.
I'm so hideous I don't know how I have any friends.
I hate when people talk about feeding,
And how I should eat.
The word alone makes me angrier
Than you could ever understand.

All this flab and giant thighs,
I exercise till I almost pass out
It's not enough to stop children's cries
125 pounds of gut and a jelly-bean shaped face,
I look like I'm from some alien race,
and my eyes are like dog-crap
my hair is the same.
No matter how I dye it,
it looks just as bad when I change.

I want to be beautiful
And I want to be free
I want to feel wanted
In a hot sexy body.
I feel no matter how many meals I skip,
Or cut down on food,
Or run until I fall down into an open pit
I still remain as always,
A stupid ugly kid. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 61 [informant] => AssassinatorGirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Hatred Pure

Contributed by AssassinatorGirl on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 11:05:20 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I don't want to look in the mirror
Because I don't feel like bleeding.
I'm so hideous I don't know how I have any friends.
I hate when people talk about feeding,
And how I should eat.
The word alone makes me angrier
Than you could ever understand.

All this flab and giant thighs,
I exercise till I almost pass out
It's not enough to stop children's cries
125 pounds of gut and a jelly-bean shaped face,
I look like I'm from some alien race,
and my eyes are like dog-crap
my hair is the same.
No matter how I dye it,
it looks just as bad when I change.

I want to be beautiful
And I want to be free
I want to feel wanted
In a hot sexy body.
I feel no matter how many meals I skip,
Or cut down on food,
Or run until I fall down into an open pit
I still remain as always,
A stupid ugly kid.

Copyright © AssassinatorGirl ... [ 2005-09-29 23:05:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hatred Pure (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:16:08 PM AEST
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:( You shouldn't starve yourself, in fact, eat as much healthy food as you can. You'll lose weight and look better. I eat 24/7 and I still look skinny... It's sorta weird. But :) GL

Re: Hatred Pure (User Rating: 1 )
by Minus_Blindfold on Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 04:13:19 PM AEST
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that was weird...two thumbs up!

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