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Nothing is calm,
The buzz brings the Charm,
With a mystic Alarm.

Logic the King
Had a magic Ring,
He shut it in a Chip
And sold it on a Trip.

The buyer was Gates,
Who belonged to States.
Why was he to take ?
For, it was a mistake.

Their Charts were fake
And everything was a make,
Numbers they sold,
For the price of Gold !

The pet of every Spouse,
Was their power House,
With light years of Data to browse,
And all that, stole by a Mouse !

The people are crazy,
They make others lazy,
The scene is very breezy,
Yet, they take it all too easy.

Manjunath Shastry

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THE VIRTUAL WORLD

Contributed by shastry on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 01:03:00 AM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

In the evergreen Realm,
Nothing is calm,
The buzz brings the Charm,
With a mystic Alarm.

Logic the King
Had a magic Ring,
He shut it in a Chip
And sold it on a Trip.

The buyer was Gates,
Who belonged to States.
Why was he to take ?
For, it was a mistake.

Their Charts were fake
And everything was a make,
Numbers they sold,
For the price of Gold !

The pet of every Spouse,
Was their power House,
With light years of Data to browse,
And all that, stole by a Mouse !

The people are crazy,
They make others lazy,
The scene is very breezy,
Yet, they take it all too easy.

Manjunath Shastry

Copyright © shastry ... [ 2005-09-29 01:03:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: THE VIRTUAL WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 01:01:57 PM AEST
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cute..lol...liked that..put a smile on my face. i really liked how you put gates in there....nice write.

Re: THE VIRTUAL WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 03:26:33 PM AEST
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Yup, cyberworld is a form of addiction. It has taken us by a storm and we cant seem to dedox from it. And all that over just a matter of years, the public net doesnt even exsist that long. We became so "dependent" of the net, its hillarious actually. We complain so much about it but yet we continue to feed this addiction.
I see ourselves living a life in future like they have in the movie "The Matrix"....we may not realise it now and laugh about it but we are building on that strongly. Just look at every day life to see how much is depending on computers.....

Well done!

Nats.

Re: THE VIRTUAL WORLD (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilly-Quill on Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 03:57:32 PM AEST
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Most people are awaiting Virtual Reality; I'm awaiting virtuous reality. But hey, I like the whole cyber world concept to a degree.

This is a uniquely brilliant muse and the title is really aprapo~!

At time I think I'm part woman and part cyborg, perhaps just too much screening the net (he-he).
~Lilly-Quill

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