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Array ( [sid] => 106719 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 13:13 [time] => 2005-09-29 00:26:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Sometimes things just happen in a way I can't comprehend
Still, knowing this doesn't make it easier to understand
Is there any reason for the suffering I've endured
But I looked to the Book to be reassured

I understand living a lie is not an option anymore
I must first find my heart, even though it's not what it was before
And then I can begin to understand the things I've missed
And still have so much to learn, but it's worth the risks

I am finally ready to become a man
I now know I can find where I stand
Because I am left with the three things we're all gifted
And finally realize why love is the one to be lifted [comments] => 1 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 61 [informant] => tetniz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

13:13

Contributed by tetniz on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 12:26:19 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Sometimes things just happen in a way I can't comprehend
Still, knowing this doesn't make it easier to understand
Is there any reason for the suffering I've endured
But I looked to the Book to be reassured

I understand living a lie is not an option anymore
I must first find my heart, even though it's not what it was before
And then I can begin to understand the things I've missed
And still have so much to learn, but it's worth the risks

I am finally ready to become a man
I now know I can find where I stand
Because I am left with the three things we're all gifted
And finally realize why love is the one to be lifted

Copyright © tetniz ... [ 2005-09-29 00:26:19]
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Re: 13:13 (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 12:46:07 AM AEST
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I am impressed! I can almost taste the aquired wisdom behind this piece. It sounds like life has taught you much. There are few things better than learning the things life has to teach, I think.

Well written, eloquent and simple styling, which fits your poem perfectly.

Well done!

Andrew

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