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Vividly it burns, the colors so bright
Like a fireball tearing my skin
I’m being eaten alive from within
What crime did I do, what divine rule did I break
Soon I will fall and leave naught in my wake
Let me burn as I stand
Keep your pity at hand
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Burning

Contributed by justkevi on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:19:26 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The pain, the fire, the ember inside
Vividly it burns, the colors so bright
Like a fireball tearing my skin
I’m being eaten alive from within
What crime did I do, what divine rule did I break
Soon I will fall and leave naught in my wake
Let me burn as I stand
Keep your pity at hand
I’m burning on the inside

Copyright Â© justkevi ... [ 2005-09-28 21:19:26]
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Re: Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 06:23:11 PM AEST
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good write also good imagery

Re: Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:26:39 AM AEST
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Hello JustKevi:

I like your write here, very nice.

Oh yes pain, sickness, unhappiness, conflict. There is a problem that hurts.

Your spirit energy could be polluted and in need of cleansing, inspired or renewed.

Could you be having guilt, shame. Some kind of powerlessness, your inner fear threatens you.

Your cold feelings, turn into energy, a fiery release, perhaps that is the passion trying to escape..

Good write, wow.

Raquel Leah :D

Re: Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 06:55:16 AM AEST
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This really spoke loudly to me. I loved the last few lines. It was short, sweet and to the point. Nice work!

Be well,
Loende

Re: Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by AshRayne on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 01:41:10 PM AEST
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i personally do not care for pity, for others thinking that i am weak. sometimes we mistake concern for pity, i know i did. don't be afraid to take the hand offered. sometimes it is the inspiration that we seek, and the passion makes us stronger.

Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.

~Ash

Re: Burning (User Rating: 1 )
by ChibiMiroku on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:47:13 PM AEST
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I liked how the poem did lots of description about something, yet still left it up to the reader to infer what it was about. Good write!

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