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Array ( [sid] => 106698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => buried alive [time] => 2005-09-28 18:53:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => my secrets remain with me
so therfeore whatever that was hurting me so bad, you will never know, but only the time will show
you brought me hell through my entire life
YOU'RE GLAD UH
but its all said and done
you tried to make it seem as if i was the one in the house driving everyone in sane
hell no
you were the one why auntie move out, was homeless for 2 months
she hated you at that time
but now the bells have ringed and victory is mine
i loved you
i loved you so much inside
but i did'n't get love back
i was always put down
told i wasn't good enough
you made me lose my damn pride
you want to take what you did not help me earn
i hope your body feeds off nothing, because i want help
its a way we all have to learn
you broke my relationship up with my husband to be
you told my sister lies that weren't true
LOOK IN THE MIRROR ***** AND TELL ME WHO ARE YOU
i have to be strong
i know at times i have done wrong
you told me that i was nothing and i want be nothing
am i something?
am i anything?
i love you, don't get me to lying here
i want you just like i did to hurt and to live in fear
i've been feeling this way since the age of five
don't ask what is wrong now
you know
i guess only the lord knows
it will be buried with you and i alive [comments] => 3 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 6 [informant] => seci [notes] => Follow Site Rules. Edited for Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
buried alive

Contributed by seci on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:53:30 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



my secrets remain with me
so therfeore whatever that was hurting me so bad, you will never know, but only the time will show
you brought me hell through my entire life
YOU'RE GLAD UH
but its all said and done
you tried to make it seem as if i was the one in the house driving everyone in sane
hell no
you were the one why auntie move out, was homeless for 2 months
she hated you at that time
but now the bells have ringed and victory is mine
i loved you
i loved you so much inside
but i did'n't get love back
i was always put down
told i wasn't good enough
you made me lose my damn pride
you want to take what you did not help me earn
i hope your body feeds off nothing, because i want help
its a way we all have to learn
you broke my relationship up with my husband to be
you told my sister lies that weren't true
LOOK IN THE MIRROR ***** AND TELL ME WHO ARE YOU
i have to be strong
i know at times i have done wrong
you told me that i was nothing and i want be nothing
am i something?
am i anything?
i love you, don't get me to lying here
i want you just like i did to hurt and to live in fear
i've been feeling this way since the age of five
don't ask what is wrong now
you know
i guess only the lord knows
it will be buried with you and i alive




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Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:24:31 PM AEST
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Wow! You have expressed a lot of anger and grief. I have to do these kinds of writes almost weekly to get through things.


Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by Evening_Star on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:11:58 PM AEST
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Wow, such anger and pent up frustrations. I know at times I have felt the way you that you have felt. I think writing is a great escape and good for the soul.
liz


Re: buried alive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:41:04 PM AEST
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wow this is powerful 2 say the least i felt the unsettling emotions in my heart, simply put a poetic version of an 6.8 on the ricta scale and
a perfect 10 on the scale of life and death, an
excellent write . . .


Ben




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