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Array ( [sid] => 106682 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Words [time] => 2005-09-28 14:23:21 [hometext] => plz comment!! dedicated to my close friend ben he has been there for me and most probably always will thanks! i have felt so many different emotions lately he has made it sain for me [bodytext] => Your words will always hurt me
Deep down in my heart
One day you say you love me
Another you dump me
I thought we were friends
Closer then ever
All i said was "Hi"
The next thing i know
I'v lost you
The tears that i have cryed
The sleep that i have lost
Even though your going out
with another one of my mates
i would say we were closer then you and her
The nights that we spend together
The laughter that we shed
The tears and secrets
That we have shared
will always stay with me
for the first time in my life
i have felt like me
no-one else can do such a thing
that makes me feel like
one millions dollars
you and only you
will make me smile
when i want to cry
you're always there
Thank you bbz
-xXx-
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Your Words

Contributed by JenJen on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:23:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Your words will always hurt me
Deep down in my heart
One day you say you love me
Another you dump me
I thought we were friends
Closer then ever
All i said was "Hi"
The next thing i know
I'v lost you
The tears that i have cryed
The sleep that i have lost
Even though your going out
with another one of my mates
i would say we were closer then you and her
The nights that we spend together
The laughter that we shed
The tears and secrets
That we have shared
will always stay with me
for the first time in my life
i have felt like me
no-one else can do such a thing
that makes me feel like
one millions dollars
you and only you
will make me smile
when i want to cry
you're always there
Thank you bbz
-xXx-

Copyright © JenJen ... [ 2005-09-28 14:23:21]
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Re: Your Words (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:54:46 PM AEST
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such a sad poem jens, really well written. well done!!!
*hugs*
megs xXx

Re: Your Words (User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:25:42 AM AEST
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I'm glad to say I've never really experienced that, therefore this one is a little over my head...

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