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Array ( [sid] => 106673 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Before, In The Beginning.... [time] => 2005-09-28 09:39:31 [hometext] => It is a long one! [bodytext] => Before ...in the beginning...was made and done.
God panned Jesus to eventually come.
Angels were existed everywhere.
As made spiritual beings, not all, did they care.
Lucifer was the naughty one.
He turned a third of the Angels against the Holy one.
They turned our earth formless and empty.
Just to obey that awful Satan-he wanted to be almighty!
God allowed Satan to enter this earth from the start.
He gave 'choices' as God has a huge heart.
God thought if He made man in human form.
As Angels are spirit beings and will never be -born-
God loves us so very much.
Once we die our spiritual form is for that special touch.
All we have to do is follow His Laws and commands.
Then we will end up like Him and know what He understands.
So when God made the heavens and the earth.
It actually started off beautiful but Satan did curse.
Adam and Eve were made to be like God.
To be in His family and do as God told.
But the serpent hissed and told a lie.
Saying its okay if you eat you will be like God wonderfully High.
Full of knowledge you will be.
And MORE powerful than He.
So Eve ate that fruit and you know how the story goes.
God was upset and naturally He would.
Turned the couple out of the Garden as He could.
Follow my Law and keep my commands
then you both will understand.
But it is so hard to follow His word.
That serpent is so clever ...it's like they never heard...
Humans were born some kept the commands...
but most just lived how satan demands...
It is easier to follow the easy way...
God had rules and satan said don't listen, okay...
Keeping the commandments is taught right from the start,
But seems so hard to keep in our hearts.
Humans were -worldly- when the ark was built back then.
God thought, I need the people to listen to me so I'll ...start again ...
But still life went worldly and no one listened to His command
So He sent dear Jesus to be our darling friend.
Jesus was so nice teaching in parables and such
He tried to tell them but many thought it double dutch...
He had God's spirit once He was ready
and made lots of miracles and was always steady
At the same time as doing all this
He was trying to get the world keep the LAW in bliss...
No Jesus did not come to get rid of the Law and Commandments
but to keep them and He added on more for the future Governments...
Love one another is what you must do,
and to keep the commandments all the way through,
all your life it is a perpetual sign,
and I will be in you forever in time.
The apostles knew about this Law
but one of the apostles thought it was a flaw
So dubbed Jesus in and did Jesus suffer?
Yes He did for us to discover....
The whole world is deceived from Satan He's tricky
He makes humans think the Law is just sticky...
But God wants us to stick to it like glue
Satan tries hard and says His way is true...
Just like in the beginning with Adam and Eve
They believed him and were surely deceived
So I ask anyone that wants to make a choice
to read up in the bible and listen for His voice.
God demanded Jesus to tell all of us
He did in torture and didn't even fuss....
He died on the cross [stake] to forgive all our sins
The sins that are in the commandments where it all begins!
Holding on to God's truth through Jesus Christ
Keep His Holy spirit to guide you to be nice
Get rid of all that human nature inside
Release it to Jesus don't let it hide!
God is so forgiving He wants us to be in His family!!
What a lovely life to be just like HE!
God will rule this world with Jesus forever.
They will be the Government and war and disasters will be- never!
Think about it how powerful will it be...
when God has put Satan to rest forever in history!
Jesus has left us now not alone but with God's Holy Spirit
So let His spirit guide you to the truth and stay on - in it.



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Before, In The Beginning....

Contributed by inoc on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:39:31 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry



Before ...in the beginning...was made and done.
God panned Jesus to eventually come.
Angels were existed everywhere.
As made spiritual beings, not all, did they care.
Lucifer was the naughty one.
He turned a third of the Angels against the Holy one.
They turned our earth formless and empty.
Just to obey that awful Satan-he wanted to be almighty!
God allowed Satan to enter this earth from the start.
He gave 'choices' as God has a huge heart.
God thought if He made man in human form.
As Angels are spirit beings and will never be -born-
God loves us so very much.
Once we die our spiritual form is for that special touch.
All we have to do is follow His Laws and commands.
Then we will end up like Him and know what He understands.
So when God made the heavens and the earth.
It actually started off beautiful but Satan did curse.
Adam and Eve were made to be like God.
To be in His family and do as God told.
But the serpent hissed and told a lie.
Saying its okay if you eat you will be like God wonderfully High.
Full of knowledge you will be.
And MORE powerful than He.
So Eve ate that fruit and you know how the story goes.
God was upset and naturally He would.
Turned the couple out of the Garden as He could.
Follow my Law and keep my commands
then you both will understand.
But it is so hard to follow His word.
That serpent is so clever ...it's like they never heard...
Humans were born some kept the commands...
but most just lived how satan demands...
It is easier to follow the easy way...
God had rules and satan said don't listen, okay...
Keeping the commandments is taught right from the start,
But seems so hard to keep in our hearts.
Humans were -worldly- when the ark was built back then.
God thought, I need the people to listen to me so I'll ...start again ...
But still life went worldly and no one listened to His command
So He sent dear Jesus to be our darling friend.
Jesus was so nice teaching in parables and such
He tried to tell them but many thought it double dutch...
He had God's spirit once He was ready
and made lots of miracles and was always steady
At the same time as doing all this
He was trying to get the world keep the LAW in bliss...
No Jesus did not come to get rid of the Law and Commandments
but to keep them and He added on more for the future Governments...
Love one another is what you must do,
and to keep the commandments all the way through,
all your life it is a perpetual sign,
and I will be in you forever in time.
The apostles knew about this Law
but one of the apostles thought it was a flaw
So dubbed Jesus in and did Jesus suffer?
Yes He did for us to discover....
The whole world is deceived from Satan He's tricky
He makes humans think the Law is just sticky...
But God wants us to stick to it like glue
Satan tries hard and says His way is true...
Just like in the beginning with Adam and Eve
They believed him and were surely deceived
So I ask anyone that wants to make a choice
to read up in the bible and listen for His voice.
God demanded Jesus to tell all of us
He did in torture and didn't even fuss....
He died on the cross [stake] to forgive all our sins
The sins that are in the commandments where it all begins!
Holding on to God's truth through Jesus Christ
Keep His Holy spirit to guide you to be nice
Get rid of all that human nature inside
Release it to Jesus don't let it hide!
God is so forgiving He wants us to be in His family!!
What a lovely life to be just like HE!
God will rule this world with Jesus forever.
They will be the Government and war and disasters will be- never!
Think about it how powerful will it be...
when God has put Satan to rest forever in history!
Jesus has left us now not alone but with God's Holy Spirit
So let His spirit guide you to the truth and stay on - in it.







Copyright © inoc ... [ 2005-09-28 09:39:31]
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Re: Before, In The Beginning.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:54:54 AM AEST
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This is good. -Thanks for the reminder.


Re: Before, In The Beginning.... (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:55:54 AM AEST
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sorry the above word was suppose to be planned....not panned in my poem.
coni


Re: Before, In The Beginning.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:03:48 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice of literature 2 your almighty

a wonderful presentation . . .


Ben


Re: Before, In The Beginning.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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Coni:

I truly want to thank you for writing such a beautiful poem to share to the world, just what, went on, what is still going on, and how we can overcome the wars and disasters inside of our bodies and outside of our bodies.

I like how you penned the beginning sentences as a statement.

The style truly stopped me from reading the next sentence until I slowly breathed in its meaning, before going on, to keep the truths alive, to listen, to hear, to walk toward the light, and not to stay in the dark.

I will never ever get enough of this type of reading, for me, it is something to learn each day, listening to Gods words over and over.

Today is a special day for me, to rejoice in the beautiful life that God intended us to have, He welcomes us all to come to Him, to live where He lives, He has prepared a most beautiful home for us, to join in His family. Who will join me and Coni?

A poet once wrote this song...

Building For Eternity

We are building in sorrow or joy
A temple the world many not see,
Which time cannot mar nor destroy;
We build for eternity.

Chorus:

We are building ev'ry day,
A temple the world may not see;
Building, building ev'ry day,
Building for eternity.

Ev'ry thought that we've ever had
Its own little place has filled;
Ev'ry deed we have done, good or bad,
Is a stone in the temple we build.

Ev'ry word that so lightly falls,
Giving some heart joy or pain,
Will shine in our temple walls,
Or ever its beauty stain.

Are you building for God alone---
Are you building in faith and love
A temple the Father will own
In the city of light above?

N.B. Sargent


Thank you for this gift, this most wonderful poem on this day Coni, bless you my sister, and bless all of my sisters and brothers in Jesus name, Amen

Raquel Leah





Re: Before, In The Beginning.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Hippie on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:28:24 AM AEST
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a powerful poem, and very one written. well done and let god be with you.

peace........

Hippie
x




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