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Through times of sorrow and hope tomorrow, the one there from the start
To wish away through all the day and be there by your side
To show the most and hold you close 'til all your tears have dried
I wish I would, I wish I could, bring all the stars to you
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Only if You Were Here

Contributed by toddy29 on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:01:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I hope to be what you can see, the one that's in your heart
Through times of sorrow and hope tomorrow, the one there from the start
To wish away through all the day and be there by your side
To show the most and hold you close 'til all your tears have dried
I wish I would, I wish I could, bring all the stars to you
And pull you near to lose all fear while all our dreams come true

Copyright © toddy29 ... [ 2005-09-28 02:01:55]
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Re: Only if You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by strider on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:21:02 AM AEST
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A very good poem, very simple and I like the flow.

Re: Only if You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:24:04 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Only if You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:13:07 AM AEST
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Very nice ....Your dream come true.... mylady

Re: Only if You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:21:47 AM AEST
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This is good though it is am impossibility. I like the words any way.

Re: Only if You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by highly_flammable on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:00:01 PM AEST
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This was a very sweet poem. I liked the words you used and the rhythm fits the poem. Good job.

Re: Only if You Were Here (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 06:48:22 PM AEST
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I found this nauseating. The style was good the flow was there, i geuss that's all that really matters, personal opinions aside.
haven't seen much of your stuff so keep it up.

~there is a sickness far more brutal than leprosy ensuring of fatality and blind to its own thalidomide presence-to its victims this sickness is known as-love~weepingprophet

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