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Array ( [sid] => 106650 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Surreal and Distraught [time] => 2005-09-28 00:24:42 [hometext] => [bodytext] => echo, everything around me sounds like an echo.
reverberate, the sounds bounce back and forth.
sweaty, are these palms...cold are these hands.
caught, in this world...i didnt even ask to be brought here.
surreal, i dont even know who i am...or where i am.

distraught, eyes are blurry...and mind is broken.
discouraged...wish i could do something right for once.
ignore me, the little pin in my heart will never be pulled.
worried, and anxious about the most miniscule of events.
exhausted, my young heart is tired of beating and racing.

panicking, im never very receptive...my mind is always racing.
pills, they take the edge away...chemicals to mend my head.
straight, lines i cant even draw, basic knowledge i never learned.
life, my entire life...i have been so down...with the occassional up.
death, or life...i just want to exhale withouth worry and self hatred.

prison, im stuck,im in a living hell, i need some love.
love, i need to love myself...but its really hard, when im this ***** up.
when, my life is a failure, when everything around me seems like too much.
attacks, its the panic that kills me, and leaves me for dead.
survive, hopefully i survive this next year alright, and dont go insane. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 48 [informant] => frmpoison2static [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Surreal and Distraught

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 12:24:42 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

echo, everything around me sounds like an echo.
reverberate, the sounds bounce back and forth.
sweaty, are these palms...cold are these hands.
caught, in this world...i didnt even ask to be brought here.
surreal, i dont even know who i am...or where i am.

distraught, eyes are blurry...and mind is broken.
discouraged...wish i could do something right for once.
ignore me, the little pin in my heart will never be pulled.
worried, and anxious about the most miniscule of events.
exhausted, my young heart is tired of beating and racing.

panicking, im never very receptive...my mind is always racing.
pills, they take the edge away...chemicals to mend my head.
straight, lines i cant even draw, basic knowledge i never learned.
life, my entire life...i have been so down...with the occassional up.
death, or life...i just want to exhale withouth worry and self hatred.

prison, im stuck,im in a living hell, i need some love.
love, i need to love myself...but its really hard, when im this ***** up.
when, my life is a failure, when everything around me seems like too much.
attacks, its the panic that kills me, and leaves me for dead.
survive, hopefully i survive this next year alright, and dont go insane.

Copyright © frmpoison2static ... [ 2005-09-28 00:24:42]
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Re: Surreal and Distraught (User Rating: 1 )
by Echoes on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:43:59 AM AEST
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good use of emotion, told from within, the first stanza catches the reader's attention, good write

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