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Array ( [sid] => 106639 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my lover, my teacher, my friend [time] => 2005-09-27 21:55:53 [hometext] => to someone who has shown me that it is ok to be me [bodytext] => I found him on the internet, it seems to be the trend,
this gentle man who fills my soul....
my lover, my teacher, my friend.

He has shown me how to like myself and never to pretend,
no matter what the mirror says.....
my lover, my teacher, my friend.

He will not stay, to his heart he must attend,
for he searches still, for love fulfilled.....
my lover,my teacher, my friend

So I call upon the powers that be, these are the words they send,
"Peace, Light and Love, we grant to him, until his journey ends......
for he helped our child....to remember to smile"
my lover, my teacher, my friend [comments] => 8 [counter] => 382 [topic] => 16 [informant] => sararose1950 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 36 [ratings] => 9 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

my lover, my teacher, my friend

Contributed by sararose1950 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:55:53 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I found him on the internet, it seems to be the trend,
this gentle man who fills my soul....
my lover, my teacher, my friend.

He has shown me how to like myself and never to pretend,
no matter what the mirror says.....
my lover, my teacher, my friend.

He will not stay, to his heart he must attend,
for he searches still, for love fulfilled.....
my lover,my teacher, my friend

So I call upon the powers that be, these are the words they send,
"Peace, Light and Love, we grant to him, until his journey ends......
for he helped our child....to remember to smile"
my lover, my teacher, my friend

Copyright © sararose1950 ... [ 2005-09-27 21:55:53]
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Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:58:43 PM AEST
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Absolutely stunning. I loved the line "my lover, my teacher, my friend" and how you worked your way around it. Beautiful write.

Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Pisces101 on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:05:34 AM AEST
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this poem is very sweet

Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:17:06 AM AEST
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A fine tribute to someone that no doubt deserves your praise.
We gotta be true to ourselves as life is better when we're free to be who we are.
huggs, big smiles,
emy

Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by dobad on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:00:16 AM AEST
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BRAVO! Looking past the mirror can be a sign of desire to help another. Helping others, we often find what we ourselves have hidden away. We are all students, care and understanding the teacher. You are truly an "A" student! GOOD WRITE!

Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:58:43 PM AEST
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Very nice. Sounds like you've met a special person who has helped you overcome some personal struggles. This is a sweet tribute write to your friend. Hope you share it with him!

Scorp.

Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:31:21 PM AEST
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This is very nice....Touching the heart as well as the soul....Great write indeed..
God Bless!

Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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very nice glad you found love

Re: my lover, my teacher, my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 03:32:34 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful sara, a peice of perfection if ever there was.

Ben

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