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A voice so clear,what could it be?

In unison the wind cried "trust"
I tried not to hear-but hear it I must

It guides my thoughts-it quiets my fears
It gives me hope- it releases my tears

From forever before-until forever the end
It has taken this lost soul on a path -to a friend [comments] => 8 [counter] => 404 [topic] => 16 [informant] => sararose1950 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Trust

Contributed by sararose1950 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

One starlit night it called to me-
A voice so clear,what could it be?

In unison the wind cried "trust"
I tried not to hear-but hear it I must

It guides my thoughts-it quiets my fears
It gives me hope- it releases my tears

From forever before-until forever the end
It has taken this lost soul on a path -to a friend

Copyright © sararose1950 ... [ 2005-09-27 21:33:32]
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Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:48:23 PM AEST
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I thought, this was a very devoted write, to some one who you had, in your life, that was a #1 trusted soul.! Very deep, and very inner, lovely write.! We all need a ONE like that.and we they are found, they never really die.! Such passion

Brew~

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by highly_flammable on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:59:09 PM AEST
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This is an amazingly well written poem. You put your thoughts into words beautifully. Everyone needs a forever friend. I'm sorry for your loss. I'll look forward to reading more from you. Once again, great job.

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:28:50 PM AEST
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Very well written and expressed, I know the feeling.

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by SPSM on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 07:14:50 AM AEST
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Very nicely written.

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by dobad on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:27:08 AM AEST
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A beautiful write and wonderful tribute to the loss of someone dear.

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:53:36 PM AEST
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A profound write. I really like this. Good flow to this poem too. Keep it up!

Welcome to YPDC: )

Scorp.

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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Beautifu; Sara. Yes trust we must.
Everythig depends on it.
Trust encompasses the 3 casrdinal virtues, Love, Faith, Hope and Love.
Thanks for sharijg this with us.
Blessings
Elizabeth

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 08:38:21 PM AEST
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sararose1950

Trust
Sararose your forever friend eyes you each day.
Within the communion of saints she prays for you.
Its sad to lose a friend,but you gained an angel.
In the Glory of God you have a friend.
Look heavenward he/she is with you a forever friend.

Beautiful touching poem

Sinned

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