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Array ( [sid] => 106633 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ThE eDgE [time] => 2005-09-27 21:13:19 [hometext] => Looking down from a high cliff standing on the edge.....wondering where your fate lies... [bodytext] => Standing at the edge of the end,
Wondering why am I here still.
I jump into the darkness,
The chains are no longer there.

The air is fluttering all around me,
My black hair welcomes the breeze.
I’m falling faster,
This will be my last disaster.

My makeup is all smeared,
The tears are pouring out with fears.
I want all this pain to end,
Soon you’ll hear a smash.

Inch and inch closer to the ground,
Will my dying fate happen now?
I close my eyes,
Ready to take on the break.

I feel no cement, no ground.
I feel the warmth flesh around.
Opening my eyes,
You’re here for once.

My savior of death,
Saving me from my last mistake.
You stare at me,
Just holding me in your arms.

No words are needed,
You actually do care.
I thought you wouldn’t be there
But you were.

You saved me from the edge,
My dying fate has another end. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MysticFireFairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

ThE eDgE

Contributed by MysticFireFairy on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:13:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Standing at the edge of the end,
Wondering why am I here still.
I jump into the darkness,
The chains are no longer there.

The air is fluttering all around me,
My black hair welcomes the breeze.
I’m falling faster,
This will be my last disaster.

My makeup is all smeared,
The tears are pouring out with fears.
I want all this pain to end,
Soon you’ll hear a smash.

Inch and inch closer to the ground,
Will my dying fate happen now?
I close my eyes,
Ready to take on the break.

I feel no cement, no ground.
I feel the warmth flesh around.
Opening my eyes,
You’re here for once.

My savior of death,
Saving me from my last mistake.
You stare at me,
Just holding me in your arms.

No words are needed,
You actually do care.
I thought you wouldn’t be there
But you were.

You saved me from the edge,
My dying fate has another end.

Copyright Â© MysticFireFairy ... [ 2005-09-27 21:13:19]
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Re: ThE eDgE (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:35:12 PM AEST
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That pretty crazy, the metaphor of being on the edge is pretty familiar, i go there once a month

Re: ThE eDgE (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:53:31 PM AEST
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i THINK WE ALL HAVE our EDGE, ONE WAY OR ANTOHER...NOT JUST AS THAT. i HAVE ALWAYS WANTED TO JUST SIT AND DANGILY MY FEET. Well, there is mre than Jumping..........seek and ye shall find. We all do, sooner or later. just have faith!

Brew~

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