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Writing in class
You and I
Having a blast
Talking, chatting
Papers ungraded
Teacher disapproves
Now we're separated

After school sports
Mutual friends
Knowing too well
On you I can depend
All the reasons
That we've never faded
As loving friends
Though we're separated

A pang of guilt
When I look around
And your perfect girlfriend
Is nowhere to be found
And I feel it's my fault
When you two have dated
But when I'm around
You appear separated

My friends and I
Have started to think
That because when I'm around
Your cheeks turn pink
Maybe, just maybe
Our friendship's outdated
We've become something more
Although we're separated

I know that I like you
I know that I flirt
But I can't be with you
Without someone getting hurt
And despite how I want it
I know if we dated
I'd feel so much guilt
Because you'd be separated [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Separated

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:25:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Just sitting together
Writing in class
You and I
Having a blast
Talking, chatting
Papers ungraded
Teacher disapproves
Now we're separated

After school sports
Mutual friends
Knowing too well
On you I can depend
All the reasons
That we've never faded
As loving friends
Though we're separated

A pang of guilt
When I look around
And your perfect girlfriend
Is nowhere to be found
And I feel it's my fault
When you two have dated
But when I'm around
You appear separated

My friends and I
Have started to think
That because when I'm around
Your cheeks turn pink
Maybe, just maybe
Our friendship's outdated
We've become something more
Although we're separated

I know that I like you
I know that I flirt
But I can't be with you
Without someone getting hurt
And despite how I want it
I know if we dated
I'd feel so much guilt
Because you'd be separated

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-09-27 20:25:01]
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Re: Separated (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 12:43:20 AM AEST
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Wow,this was a terrific write...I didn't expect it to turn out like this.You are a really thoughtful person because these days,people only thrive on their own satisfaction.Still,I know where you're coming from,and I do hope it'll run smoothly for you,for your own heart.As hard as it would be on her if anything happened,it's hard on you right now.You're a strong person and I believe in karma.You'll get something great soon.Great write,
PumpkinPie

Re: Separated (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:43:07 PM AEST
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Awww.... Kiela... *hugs*

I'm sorry you're feeling like this, sweetie. I really am.

I hope he understands soon.

Heartbreaking write,
*hugs tons*

Phil xxx

Re: Separated (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:10:26 PM AEST
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Kiela you have the amazing ability to be able to put pen to paper and pour out ur emotions.
Such a hard situation to be. Someone will always wind up been hurt and I hope and pray it's not u my dear friend. A heartfelt emotional piece. Keep penning those emotions sweet girl. A very talented Miss u sure are. I hope things work out 4 u.
Much love,
*sue*

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