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What I used to be.
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 06:28:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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A place to store broken memories
A spot meant only for them
A cavern deep within
Where all secerts hide in.
A lonely cold place
A drawer when memeries are kept
The tears caught in the darkness low
So no one else will see.
Tears they will be running freely
and with each drop I catch them as
they fall
In remembrance of what I used to be.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-09-27 18:28:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What I used to be.
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 06:32:42 PM AEST (User
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forgetting is the hard part good write short but to the point
keep up the great work
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Re: What I used to be.
(User Rating: 1 ) by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:01:26 PM AEST (User
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I like this one alot. Good work.
C. |
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Re: What I used to be.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Darkhorse71 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:57:12 PM AEST (User
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I can relate, sorry for your pain. I'll be watching for more. Good write.
peace, john |
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Re: What I used to be.
(User Rating: 1 ) by SPSM on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:10:48 PM AEST (User
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I can relate to this one. Very good write. I to have a place where I store memories of what I use to be. |
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Re: What I used to be.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Caged Soul on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:05:17 AM AEST (User
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I like it when I read stuff and it seems as though I wrote it because of the things being dealt with in the poem being so close to what I'm going through in my life at that moment in time. This is one of those poems.
Thanks for sharing this piece with us!
Much love and respect.
~souLBro~ |
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