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Bloody Broken Mirror
Contributed by
zaknafein8891
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:57:53 PM in AEST
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StoryPoetry
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Who's that staring back at me?
Just an empty shell,
all that's left of who he used to be.
So much pain reflected in his eyes.
Far too much for him to hide,
well at least from me.
He wants to hide so I can't see.
Against my will I must behold,
deep down in his soul, the emptiness,
the hole.
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Re: Bloody Broken Mirror
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 06:34:58 PM AEST (User
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interesting write we are all shells in truth cool simple write keep it up |
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Re: Bloody Broken Mirror
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:37:03 PM AEST (User
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So sorry, that you feel like you do. ! We are all a shell on the outer, yer so MUCH on the inner...........you need to look and SEE...........Im sure you can, and will. Good self, thinking.
Brew~ |
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Re: Bloody Broken Mirror
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChibiMiroku on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:05:53 PM AEST (User
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Shells inside shells; yet often enough, the outer breaks open, revealing what's inside. It's only by breaking apart the outer shells do we ever truly know others.....or ourselves.
Great write! |
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