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Secrets of eternity
Contributed by
poetsoul
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:23:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A billion suns yet wait for me,
To a greater tranquility.
Soul’s hope are the rays of gold,
Invisibly springs in manifold.
From light that makes the sun feel dark.
From worlds that men cannot embark.
I pray and dream for hope to see,
The secrets of eternity!
Here I wait in temporal travel,
Stuck between the sky and gravel.
In this world of music and art,
I play my little poet’s part.
I place within the deepest wells,
The stories that my future tells.
Unknown they are, but soon will see,
The secrets of eternity!
There I go on foot and flights,
With backpack strapped in metal kites.
I’ll know the peoples of every land.
I’ll kiss their lips and join their band.
I’ll join them round the village flame,
For that is where I find my fame.
Writing in journals are the souls I see,
The secrets of eternity!
Perhaps I’ll take myself a mate,
To travel on through every gate.
I care not if, it’s women or man,
For all souls make that final stand.
So come with me my soul companion.
Let’s walk the walls in hidden canyons.
And you and I, we both will see,
The secrets of eternity!
The greatest gift is when we’re old,
Living in those days of gold.
We’ll leave together to travel and run,
Far off past this lonely sun.
And back to where all souls go to,
To unlock the riddles of every clue.
Then flying to other suns we’ll see,
The secrets of eternity!
Copyright ©
poetsoul
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2005-09-27 15:23:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Secrets of eternity
(User Rating: 1 ) by bethie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:39:27 PM AEST (User
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Magnifico! Thank you. |
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Re: Secrets of eternity
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:20:12 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful poem, some very deep thoughts here. |
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Re: Secrets of eternity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:31:27 PM AEST (User
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Nice write i could feel the emotion of the question of eternity.
Whisper |
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Re: Secrets of eternity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Justintears on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:53:14 PM AEST (User
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it's been a while since i read something as deep as this. Excellent write and well prosed. I'd cry for the best if i could.... well done. ~justin~
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Re: Secrets of eternity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 06:33:41 PM AEST (User
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The first two stanzas were perfect. This is awesome. I will definately check out more of your writes if they start with the skill this one has they will be highly enjoyable. |
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Re: Secrets of eternity
(User Rating: 1 ) by poisonpen00ad on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:08:55 PM AEST (User
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Deep and full of imagination. Good work.
C. |
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