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untitled
Contributed by
diamonds22
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:20:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the nights are lonely, long, eternal
when the sun bleeds velvet in the shallow sky
that's when i fold up like a primrose
shy and withered like a final breath
waiting for the dawn to come
waiting for the bright new sun
Copyright ©
diamonds22
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2005-09-27 12:20:38] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Pisces101 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:48:13 PM AEST (User
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short and sweet. refreshing |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by bethie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 02:25:39 PM AEST (User
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touching and tender. thank you. |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:49:17 PM AEST (User
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Nice write. Simple plain and clear :-)
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Urizen on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 05:29:45 PM AEST (User
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Really nice, I liked it sumed up my frame of mind completly, thank you |
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