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Array ( [sid] => 10659 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Dagger Filled Eyes [time] => 2003-01-18 15:00:00 [hometext] => * Yes... this is very angry. Its directed towards all the people at the pool... or the hot tub to be more specific. Yeah hope ya like this. * [bodytext] => I see your dagger filled eyes
Cutting me apart
Do you think your opinion really matters?
I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU!

Your just hostile to the words
Written on my legs
You hate reading how my week went,
BUT YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW... so don't try

You still stare as I slip under the water
Do you expect me to break into tears?
Sure it stings or do you wanna look somemore?
YOUR NO SICKER THAN ME!

Your afraid of this little bit of abnormality
Does it wound your spirit?
Crawl over you like a thousand spiders?
You make me sick
Maybe I'll cry
Because your so ***** IGNORANT [comments] => 9 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 6 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Dagger Filled Eyes

Contributed by bobotheclown on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I see your dagger filled eyes
Cutting me apart
Do you think your opinion really matters?
I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU!

Your just hostile to the words
Written on my legs
You hate reading how my week went,
BUT YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW... so don't try

You still stare as I slip under the water
Do you expect me to break into tears?
Sure it stings or do you wanna look somemore?
YOUR NO SICKER THAN ME!

Your afraid of this little bit of abnormality
Does it wound your spirit?
Crawl over you like a thousand spiders?
You make me sick
Maybe I'll cry
Because your so ***** IGNORANT

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-01-18 15:00:00]
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:17:10 PM AEST
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wow.. well written. I hope you dont feel so bad know.

mckayla

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 04:19:05 PM AEST
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Awwww, Joel, your a great person and who cares about their opinion, (you know what is said about opinions anyway) we love you:)
huggs always Nessa

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 01:32:43 PM AEST
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So many people cannot understand and they do treat us as tho we are abnormal, which hurts far worse than any words embedded on our skin they could possibly read.....people fear the unknown, but sometimes if they would stop and take the time to really listen, and really get a little closer to take a look .......perhaps they would see....that were not so abnormal after all.....it's sad.....this is sad.....and it angers me when people act this way as well.....beautiful write joel you put it all together very nicely my friend...as always it's a pleasure to read you....

.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 02:56:25 PM AEST
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oh...this is so good...

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:03:53 PM AEST
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most people fear what they don't understand.
just keep writing and i'll keep reading

Sharon

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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this is very good, i like it! glad you posted it for us to read.

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:54:03 AM AEST
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Hello Joel
It's good to be here again and to read your compelling poetry again. I can identify very well with this one ....well written as always.
Love Chrissie x

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:34:19 AM AEST
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ooo, this is amazing, and, ye, who cares what they think, they don't know anything. keep writing.

Re: Dagger Filled Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by deadly_blaZe on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 06:44:20 PM AEST
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we say we dont care...but if we could only express how much we do

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