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Array ( [sid] => 106562 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost forever [time] => 2005-09-26 21:29:05 [hometext] => Rate this please, I havent written a poem in a long time [bodytext] => Everythings going down
Friendships being destroyed
Hearts being broken
Lives being taken
When will everything end
Will it ever be perfect
Just leave me here
I don't want to go through with this anymore
All the love is gone
Never to be found again
Lost in my heart
Friends slowing fading away
As life goes on
Memories passing through my head
People getting wiped off the face of the earth
Sometimes I wonder
Is there really a God
To bring so much pain and misery
If so why would he do this
To the creatures he created
So let all the pain be washed away
I want to feel right again [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 13 [informant] => LostInLife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Lost forever

Contributed by LostInLife on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:29:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Everythings going down
Friendships being destroyed
Hearts being broken
Lives being taken
When will everything end
Will it ever be perfect
Just leave me here
I don't want to go through with this anymore
All the love is gone
Never to be found again
Lost in my heart
Friends slowing fading away
As life goes on
Memories passing through my head
People getting wiped off the face of the earth
Sometimes I wonder
Is there really a God
To bring so much pain and misery
If so why would he do this
To the creatures he created
So let all the pain be washed away
I want to feel right again

Copyright © LostInLife ... [ 2005-09-26 21:29:05]
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Re: Lost forever (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:51:40 PM AEST
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i was thinking about saying life goes on so move on and it does but the part where u said sometimes i wonder if theres really a god i know how u feel im asking myselfthat question everyday of my life why would he do this to the creatures he created? great write i really enjoyed it keep it up!!

Dee,

Re: Lost forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:51:13 PM AEST
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Hmm... I like it alot. Very well written. Made me think. Good job. Keep it up!
Lauren

Re: Lost forever (User Rating: 1 )
by mjh0813 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:48:12 AM AEST
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great job!...i wonder if there is a god all the time..if he loves us so much why does he bring us pain or not help us when we need it?...i guess its something i dont think i'll ever know....keep writing!
peace and love
meg

Re: Lost forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessa_Lee on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:06:25 PM AEST
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Totally amazing! Its like you took those thoughts right out of my head. Great work!

~*~nessa_lee~*~

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