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Array ( [sid] => 106517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => suicidal letter [time] => 2005-09-26 14:04:14 [hometext] => um...just to let you all know......i'm not suicidal.......um.......comments please!!!!!!!!!! [bodytext] => laying in the shadows of the endless sleepless night,
wondering to myself," is everything alright?",
i've tried holding back all the sorrow grief and tears,
i've tried moving on and forgetting all my fears,
but time is at stake and i'm moving on so slow,
so i hold my razor to my wrist and cut it to the bone,
you'll probably say that you want me to stay,
but guess what it's too late i've already passed away,
i'm the one who made the mistake,
so it was my life that i had to take,
so don't ever worry and don't ever cry,
cause it's very natural for people to die,
i'm the one who's to blame,
for all of this that made me insane,
so this is how i'm saying goodbye,
this is my letter of suicide. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 326 [topic] => 13 [informant] => grim6669 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

suicidal letter

Contributed by grim6669 on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

laying in the shadows of the endless sleepless night,
wondering to myself," is everything alright?",
i've tried holding back all the sorrow grief and tears,
i've tried moving on and forgetting all my fears,
but time is at stake and i'm moving on so slow,
so i hold my razor to my wrist and cut it to the bone,
you'll probably say that you want me to stay,
but guess what it's too late i've already passed away,
i'm the one who made the mistake,
so it was my life that i had to take,
so don't ever worry and don't ever cry,
cause it's very natural for people to die,
i'm the one who's to blame,
for all of this that made me insane,
so this is how i'm saying goodbye,
this is my letter of suicide.

Copyright © grim6669 ... [ 2005-09-26 14:04:14]
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Re: suicidal letter (User Rating: 1 )
by pyro_maniac on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:09:38 PM AEST
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wow...thats a very powerful poem.
i love it... keep writing!
great write!
~pyro

Re: suicidal letter (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:54:00 PM AEST
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um ok happy girl understand you are not suicidal!! well then cool write?

Re: suicidal letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:02:07 PM AEST
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You have a bit different take on the suicide poem, I like it, this part especially

i'm the one who made the mistake,
so it was my life that i had to take,
so don't ever worry and don't ever cry,
cause it's very natural for people to die

That's great...

Re: suicidal letter (User Rating: 1 )
by Drmbeliever on Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 04:01:06 PM AEST
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Another wow...i really like. I have had those feelings.....i never would, but i know what its like, and that is amazing! *heather*

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