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i was happy and felt alive
now im sad and empty inside
i used to laugh and smile for real
but someone must've turned the wheel
at night i sit a cry and no matter how hard i try i cant seem to remember why
if god cares then why wont he answer my prayers?
i feel scared and alone
even in my own home
i just cant figure out where the hell everything went wrong! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 61 [informant] => mjh0813 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

this me vs that me

Contributed by mjh0813 on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:41:46 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

i dont understand what happend
i was happy and felt alive
now im sad and empty inside
i used to laugh and smile for real
but someone must've turned the wheel
at night i sit a cry and no matter how hard i try i cant seem to remember why
if god cares then why wont he answer my prayers?
i feel scared and alone
even in my own home
i just cant figure out where the hell everything went wrong!

Copyright © mjh0813 ... [ 2005-09-26 09:41:46]
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Re: this me vs that me (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 11:49:24 AM AEST
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i feel this way right now too. my life is crashing down around me and im no longer the happy gurl i was. it gets me to thinking, was i ever that girl? well i wish u well thru this, it is hard. . .if you ever need to chat u can PM me, or if you have msn u can add me
(black-rose614@hotmail.com)
btw, this is a rockin poem! i loved it!
luv, the girl with too many faces. . .lol

Re: this me vs that me (User Rating: 1 )
by expired_promises on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:55:32 PM AEST
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i really understand how you are feeling? i used to always wonder what happened to me, sometimes when i cry or feel completely alone i think i must be being immature and other times i think the truth is i just grew up too fast......

i'm always here if you need to talk babaoriley1921@yahoo.com

just remember things can always get better but they only get better if you make them better

Re: this me vs that me (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:18:16 PM AEST
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As the saying goes, It's always darkest before the Dawn And I think that applies here. God always hears us, even if we can't hear Him. Know that this is just a space in time, that He will see you though it, if you have faith. Hard to hear, and still harder to do, I know. Keep trying though, honey.
A very well expressed write.

Be well,
Loende

Re: this me vs that me (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 10:03:33 AM AEST
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Turn the mirror over and c that very happy beautiful face.think positive always.

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