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Array ( [sid] => 106505 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Labrynka [time] => 2005-09-26 09:00:49 [hometext] => This poem will serve as the introduction to the story Labrynka which I have already 2 chapters written [bodytext] => Welcome to the fabled port of Madrigal by the sea
Sitting on the continent Labrynka vast and free
Enchanted forests lie to the west to enter if you dare
Curs'ed mazes take up space in cities everywhere

Corban the young prince of the land with his knight Sir Gilfred
Try to figure out what tries to overcome his cities
I will not give too much away I'll guess you'll have to read
about the many tests they face to set their homeland free

Barter in the markets
watch the children play
see the seagulls flying
catching fish for prey
hear the clanging metal
as knights spar and joust
see the creeping forests
to the west and south

Sail upon the sea
to places of adventure
from Madrigal
as far as Nentarden
Cities burned with fire
by dragon's angry wrath
Thaeon and Driscol
now are serpant lands

Olivander plaqued by pirates
Remisen is plaqued by trees
All within Labrynka
The Isle of mystery
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Labrynka

Contributed by Archie on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:00:49 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Welcome to the fabled port of Madrigal by the sea
Sitting on the continent Labrynka vast and free
Enchanted forests lie to the west to enter if you dare
Curs'ed mazes take up space in cities everywhere

Corban the young prince of the land with his knight Sir Gilfred
Try to figure out what tries to overcome his cities
I will not give too much away I'll guess you'll have to read
about the many tests they face to set their homeland free

Barter in the markets
watch the children play
see the seagulls flying
catching fish for prey
hear the clanging metal
as knights spar and joust
see the creeping forests
to the west and south

Sail upon the sea
to places of adventure
from Madrigal
as far as Nentarden
Cities burned with fire
by dragon's angry wrath
Thaeon and Driscol
now are serpant lands

Olivander plaqued by pirates
Remisen is plaqued by trees
All within Labrynka
The Isle of mystery




Copyright © Archie ... [ 2005-09-26 09:00:49]
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Re: Labrynka (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:25:00 AM AEST
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Well done! I would really like to read it whjen you're done.
Take care.
David


Re: Labrynka (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:49:11 AM AEST
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GREAT poem, sounds like a good book.

I love fantasy stories set in the olden days.

well done
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Re: Labrynka (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:40:19 PM AEST
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Oh Archie, how lovely, yes, I will be reading the rest of those stories, I do hope you finish them all.

You are a wonderful writer, I love the poem trailer, it is a nice review to what you are working on.

Huggs from me,

Raquel Leah :D


Re: Labrynka (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 05:32:07 PM AEST
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what a wonderful imagineation you have.
A very awsome fantasy story cant wait to read more


hugs


Re: Labrynka (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:44:42 PM AEST
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WoW Archie this is sensational. I can't wait to read ur book. Talent shining through every word u write dear friend.
I love reading about enchanted forests, dragons and knights etc. Keep penning dearest Archie.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer


Re: Labrynka (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:01:12 PM AEST
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Very appealing and intreguing story; and fun images brought out when reading the unique story....wonderful imagery. Seems to trigger the imagination.

Well done, Archie

Will


Re: Labrynka (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:25:37 PM AEST
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This sounds absolutely mesmerizing. I can only hope you put the show on to post soon for us.

Rita




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