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Array ( [sid] => 106489 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Solitude [time] => 2005-09-26 01:57:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => September, 2005

Solitude
By: Danner C. Swa

The never changing thoughts of solitude,
Cloud my mind with hope and fear.
There is one excuse why,
I keep myself from the world I dear.

Pacing back and forth from wall to wall,
I think about how I’m sick of them all.
Why can’t they accept me for me,
And not just some conforming *doll.

They’ll never appreciate,
The potential I possess.
I would never deviate,
I must have success.

Impossible to avoid feeling this way,
This long list of insecurities.
Is it possible to throw them all away,
And obtain some personal sanctuary.

There is a small ray of light,
Shining though the night.
I turn to face it,
But it’s vaguely bright.

I start to realize I’m wasting time,
I should try to prove them wrong.
They are nothing but a paradigm,
When will I become headstrong.

I think I’m ready to face my fears,
And approach my so called peers.
I’ll tell them to their face,
What I’ve wanted to say for years.

*Puppet, or marionette [comments] => 2 [counter] => 296 [topic] => 48 [informant] => DannerSwa [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Solitude

Contributed by DannerSwa on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:57:53 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



September, 2005

Solitude
By: Danner C. Swa

The never changing thoughts of solitude,
Cloud my mind with hope and fear.
There is one excuse why,
I keep myself from the world I dear.

Pacing back and forth from wall to wall,
I think about how I’m sick of them all.
Why can’t they accept me for me,
And not just some conforming *doll.

They’ll never appreciate,
The potential I possess.
I would never deviate,
I must have success.

Impossible to avoid feeling this way,
This long list of insecurities.
Is it possible to throw them all away,
And obtain some personal sanctuary.

There is a small ray of light,
Shining though the night.
I turn to face it,
But it’s vaguely bright.

I start to realize I’m wasting time,
I should try to prove them wrong.
They are nothing but a paradigm,
When will I become headstrong.

I think I’m ready to face my fears,
And approach my so called peers.
I’ll tell them to their face,
What I’ve wanted to say for years.

*Puppet, or marionette




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Re: Solitude (User Rating: 1 )
by Desolated_Denial on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:21:14 AM AEST
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I can really relate to your style of writing. A lot of my poems central around more desolate views but same structure. I love it! Direct, straight to the point ... yet paradoxically abstract and reflects an individual. I really like it


Re: Solitude (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:36:16 AM AEST
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Keep writing as u will out wit them with your wisdom.
Very beautifully written.
huggs,
emy




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