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I watch you drive away.
And as you move away from sight,
Then I just have to pray;
Dear Lord go with my baby.
I hope you know today,
That she’s the one to keep me here,
From ever going astray.
Dear Lord oh please protect her.
Bless her today I pray.
Take all her ills and pains and cares,
And troubles far away.

And as I’m praying for you,
I also close my eyes.
I remember then those kisses,
With warmth, and love, and pride.
And as I do I take my tongue
And brush my lips, it’s true.
For I’m reliving those sweet kisses,
And again I’m feeling you.
I remember also holding hands,
So delicate and soft.
And I would hold them anywhere,
In a mansion or hay loft.

Dear Lord go with my Darling.
I love her more than life.
Take away her pain again I pray,
And every single strife.
Dear Lord thank You for blessing me
With the wonders of this girl.
She is the greatest blessing,
I’ve had while in this world!

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DEAR LORD !

Contributed by ROBERT_EDGAR_BURNS on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 09:31:55 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Your kisses still wet on my lips,
I watch you drive away.
And as you move away from sight,
Then I just have to pray;
Dear Lord go with my baby.
I hope you know today,
That she’s the one to keep me here,
From ever going astray.
Dear Lord oh please protect her.
Bless her today I pray.
Take all her ills and pains and cares,
And troubles far away.

And as I’m praying for you,
I also close my eyes.
I remember then those kisses,
With warmth, and love, and pride.
And as I do I take my tongue
And brush my lips, it’s true.
For I’m reliving those sweet kisses,
And again I’m feeling you.
I remember also holding hands,
So delicate and soft.
And I would hold them anywhere,
In a mansion or hay loft.

Dear Lord go with my Darling.
I love her more than life.
Take away her pain again I pray,
And every single strife.
Dear Lord thank You for blessing me
With the wonders of this girl.
She is the greatest blessing,
I’ve had while in this world!

Copyright Â© ROBERT_EDGAR_BURNS ... [ 2005-09-25 21:31:55]
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Re: DEAR LORD ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 09:38:30 PM AEST
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Wonderful bond formed with lover.. no fear, all honesty.. Powerful, I love the process, evidencing effective understanding of the material written, beautiful prayer as well, most gratifying for the senses to read,write, you do bring those senses alive for the reader. God Bless you Robert, wonderful writer. Spiritually intellectual write to me.

Raquel Leah :D

Re: DEAR LORD ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:24:36 PM AEST
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Simply beautiful. It's full of delicate love. I wish her good luck.

Re: DEAR LORD ! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:35:29 AM AEST
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Welcome back stranger.
Awesome write as always.
huggs,
emy

Re: DEAR LORD ! (User Rating: 1 )
by jajalovey on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:32:15 AM AEST
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Very nice very lovey : )

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