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Array ( [sid] => 106456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Travel With Me [time] => 2005-09-25 14:23:12 [hometext] => This poem was something totally random it just came out, its very odd... [bodytext] => Please come take my hand
I will show you all the land
For life can be so bland
So let us go unplanned

We’ll start in the mountains
Climb them and reach the heavens
Where all sound deafens
Where the air deepens

Travel down into the forest
We’ll go to the dampest and deepest
Down into the greenest and greatest
Parts that have not been canvassed

Now comes the heated desert
Of course there’s not much comfort
And the cactus can hurt
At least you don’t need a sweatshirt

We finally reach the beach
Looks like it’s been colored with bleach
The birds here all screech
But nothing here will beseech

Now as the sun sets
Tell me if you have regrets
Or did you enjoy yourself
When you traveled with me?

-Channing- [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 27 [informant] => Channing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

Travel With Me

Contributed by Channing on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:23:12 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Please come take my hand
I will show you all the land
For life can be so bland
So let us go unplanned

We’ll start in the mountains
Climb them and reach the heavens
Where all sound deafens
Where the air deepens

Travel down into the forest
We’ll go to the dampest and deepest
Down into the greenest and greatest
Parts that have not been canvassed

Now comes the heated desert
Of course there’s not much comfort
And the cactus can hurt
At least you don’t need a sweatshirt

We finally reach the beach
Looks like it’s been colored with bleach
The birds here all screech
But nothing here will beseech

Now as the sun sets
Tell me if you have regrets
Or did you enjoy yourself
When you traveled with me?

-Channing-

Copyright Â© Channing ... [ 2005-09-25 14:23:12]
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Re: Travel With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:17:17 PM AEST
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Enjoyed it quite a lot, I must say, thank you very much.

Re: Travel With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarletrayne on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:55:21 PM AEST
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Very nice, I enjoyed it, can't wait for more.

Re: Travel With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:58:40 PM AEST
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Traveled to many destinations..from moutains, to froests.....then to a enchanted beach........this was very vivid, and tool me on traveling with you. Liked it.! Sometimes random, and abstract are the best.!

Brew~

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