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Array ( [sid] => 106451 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Painfully Truly in Love [time] => 2005-09-25 13:32:44 [hometext] => The Guiding light of the [bodytext] => Watching the rivers of raindrops
as they run streaming against the window pane
My heart breaks and my eyes weep as with the passing of time.

A misguided Love that had not a chance to begin with
Even after we were finally found out.

The Love we shared has all melted away
just as this rain has fallen
The emotion that fueled me for so very long
Now
Gone

We swore we would never say Good bye
Our journeys took us secertly to such remarkable highs
Inside my senses are left reeling
Spinning forever
Gone from you

The Love I believed once in a lifetime
I now know were mostly lies
and still I remain unguarded
Finally having to realize
we had never meant to be
really.

Not able to bring back the magic
that blinded
us once
The Love we felt just slipped away
One night while we stood
crying,
pleading with each other
in the light of the full moon .
No tears did I shed while you stood there
breaking my Spirit and questioning why.

Nor did l I show what you 've really done
How the scar will encrust my heart forever .

We knew we were through
We just Couldn't Continue
like this
But you could not part as simple friends
like how this all harmlessly began .

Your only way to leave me
was that I hate you.

My biggest fears about being alone had come true
Because I no longer have you .

The days that pass now seem so different
Missing and hoping to hear the simple sound of that voice
just saying Hello.

Cause even though I have cast off every kept reminder
and every picture you've ever drawn
Your name I will always Whisper
Crying in the Wind .

That special Love we had is gone
and I miss it so
But you have moved on
and I will adapt
I will eventfully move on as well

But that Lonely aching space in my heart will be
Forever the
Reminder

That once I had witnessed being Painfully
and Truly in Love.

Whisper
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Painfully Truly in Love

Contributed by Whisper on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:32:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Watching the rivers of raindrops
as they run streaming against the window pane
My heart breaks and my eyes weep as with the passing of time.

A misguided Love that had not a chance to begin with
Even after we were finally found out.

The Love we shared has all melted away
just as this rain has fallen
The emotion that fueled me for so very long
Now
Gone

We swore we would never say Good bye
Our journeys took us secertly to such remarkable highs
Inside my senses are left reeling
Spinning forever
Gone from you

The Love I believed once in a lifetime
I now know were mostly lies
and still I remain unguarded
Finally having to realize
we had never meant to be
really.

Not able to bring back the magic
that blinded
us once
The Love we felt just slipped away
One night while we stood
crying,
pleading with each other
in the light of the full moon .
No tears did I shed while you stood there
breaking my Spirit and questioning why.

Nor did l I show what you 've really done
How the scar will encrust my heart forever .

We knew we were through
We just Couldn't Continue
like this
But you could not part as simple friends
like how this all harmlessly began .

Your only way to leave me
was that I hate you.

My biggest fears about being alone had come true
Because I no longer have you .

The days that pass now seem so different
Missing and hoping to hear the simple sound of that voice
just saying Hello.

Cause even though I have cast off every kept reminder
and every picture you've ever drawn
Your name I will always Whisper
Crying in the Wind .

That special Love we had is gone
and I miss it so
But you have moved on
and I will adapt
I will eventfully move on as well

But that Lonely aching space in my heart will be
Forever the
Reminder

That once I had witnessed being Painfully
and Truly in Love.

Whisper




Copyright © Whisper ... [ 2005-09-25 13:32:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Painfully Truly in Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:50:08 PM AEST
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It is very sad when love ends like that. In a way i am going through that right now. It hurts but I still love my friends who should be happy i am trying to improve my life yet for some reson they are afraid of me now.


Re: Painfully Truly in Love (User Rating: 1 )
by ForlornSapphire on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:44:00 PM AEST
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Whisper, I know your pain. As I read this poem, I felt your pain. I felt it because I can still feel mine. This was very nicely written. Thank you so much for sharing...




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