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Array ( [sid] => 106448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lady Winter [time] => 2005-09-25 12:23:10 [hometext] => Second verse in the Magic series. Been asked to explain what magic is to me. [bodytext] => ~~ Verse 2 ~~

The air is getting thin
Feeling the first chills
Birds are flying South
Lady Winter is in the air.

I can smell her scent
The trees are bare
All the flowers asleep
Ready for Winter.

Warm gloves and Winter coat
Keeping me warm as I walk
A red nose, rosey cheeks
Rubbing me hands to keep warm.

Standing here in the park
Closed eyes, head up high as I feel
The first snow flakes setting down
Touching me briddle skin.

Lady Winter made her entrance
Sprinkling her magical touches
As snow is getting thicker
Covering the ground in white.

Lights reflecting on the snow
Making everything seem so serene
Everything and everyone is asleep
When I look upon the first flakes.

This view, so magical like in a fairytale
Not a soul insight, just me standing here
In the park covered with white winter dust
As Lady Winter enters with her Magic touch.

~~ Nats ~~ [comments] => 4 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 40 [informant] => xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

Lady Winter

Contributed by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 12:23:10 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

~~ Verse 2 ~~

The air is getting thin
Feeling the first chills
Birds are flying South
Lady Winter is in the air.

I can smell her scent
The trees are bare
All the flowers asleep
Ready for Winter.

Warm gloves and Winter coat
Keeping me warm as I walk
A red nose, rosey cheeks
Rubbing me hands to keep warm.

Standing here in the park
Closed eyes, head up high as I feel
The first snow flakes setting down
Touching me briddle skin.

Lady Winter made her entrance
Sprinkling her magical touches
As snow is getting thicker
Covering the ground in white.

Lights reflecting on the snow
Making everything seem so serene
Everything and everyone is asleep
When I look upon the first flakes.

This view, so magical like in a fairytale
Not a soul insight, just me standing here
In the park covered with white winter dust
As Lady Winter enters with her Magic touch.

~~ Nats ~~

Copyright © xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx ... [ 2005-09-25 12:23:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lady Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:26:51 PM AEST
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B4 i even comment i must say, there is no

escaping your ttiltes, they in them selves are

magic, as 4 your writting, one word, lovely, so

direct it's approach, magic no, 4 magic is

based on tricks, this is more like a dream

seeking out reality, your poetry in the real

thing, simply put, " Inner Beauty "

(((((Nat)))))

Ben

Re: Lady Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:36:57 PM AEST
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Nats, it's very hard to add to what Ben just said. All I can say is you write beautifully. You are awesome and thank you for sharing that "inner beauty".

Tim
:)

Re: Lady Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkhorse71 on Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:16:27 PM AEST
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I have to laugh when I read this - only because my winter coat is nothing but a windbreaker - not even padded!!! Your beautiful poem did bring me back to the days up north and the magical beauty of the snow and cold. Your writing is very descriptive.

hugs my friend, john

Re: Lady Winter (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:24:11 PM AEST
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I certainly would agree with you there Nat, Winter is the most magical and msytical of the four seasons.
You have described it perfectly and vividly here

Steve

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