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far, far away
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:22:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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a perfect flower
on a summer's day
reminds me of you
far,far away
oh, my love
please come back to me
with you by my side
I feel safe and happy
I wish you were here
on this summer's day
but alas, you remain
far, far away
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xXxmegsxXx
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2005-09-25 04:22:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: far, far away
(User Rating: 1 ) by JenJen on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:03:57 AM AEST (User
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woah!!
it is indeed very funky/groovy!!
mwhaha gr8 poem megs love it
jenni
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Re: far, far away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:12:52 AM AEST (User
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Sometimes only simple words can describe how we truly feel. Your words are more than ample for me to know. |
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Re: far, far away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:31:59 PM AEST (User
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Good write. Heartfelt.
-Cassy |
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Re: far, far away
(User Rating: 1 ) by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 10:45:51 AM AEST (User
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very sweet- simple- even this one could understand it *smiles* thank you for sharing |
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