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If I were a rose

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:37:51 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry




If I were

If I were a poem that every one loved

You would be my words, my rhyme

If I were a song that could make every one smile

You would be my chorus, my notes

If I were a painting that made people think

You would be my colors, my brush strokes

If I were a shooting star and some one made a wish

You would be that wish, my wish

If I were a prayer that some one made every night

You would be the miracle, my angel

If I am special or handsome in any way it is only

Because I have you, I want to always have you

You are everything that is beautiful inside of me

You are my whole world, you are my everything

If I were a night time sky you would be my stars

I hide away the moon so you could shine your brightest

If I were a white rose that you picked and put to your lips

I would blush and turn red because you are so beautiful

If I we were stars in the night time sky

We would be the brightest constellation of all

Our love would shine brightly even by day

That is how you will always be to me

How I want us to always be




Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-09-25 02:37:51]
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Re: If I were a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:46:36 AM AEST
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A beautifull write but why are u down, my friend?
huggs,
emy


Re: If I were a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:08:34 AM AEST
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a very beautifl write, but i don';t understand why you are down? :S
luv
jenni
xxx


Re: If I were a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:44:51 AM AEST
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I could make this into a song. You have a great heart for the one you love. 5 stars


Re: If I were a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by trini on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:39:34 PM AEST
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amazing write, your love is strong. keep up the great work
-trini


Re: If I were a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:27:38 PM AEST
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Now what Archie, suggested , would be cool......have him make the lyrics, with the notes.and then you could give to your love..........What a neat sentitment, and an awful sweet one.! I know if anyone wrote, a song to me, or had one written, i would be in tears, and speechless.! Very elegant, write....and make it into a song.!


Brew~


Re: If I were a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 03:13:57 AM AEST
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This would make a very good song, i know why you are so down hun. I love this poem so much and it reminds me about all the gd things love can do, but then all the hurt it can cause. I hope you realize that since you sent me that ring i have worn it every day and cant bare to be without it on.

Stace xxxxx


Re: If I were a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:12:34 AM AEST
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No Ifs..for you my friend, and you can apply this to the one who created you.. and you are everything you ask for.. the ifs then are yes... you are... yes, you are definately... the creation creating a poem from "Thee..creator"... no ifs.. you are... Raquel Leah :D




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