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Baja y Bonita

Contributed by spazz911 on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 11:15:59 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Ella es baja y bonita - she is short and beautiful
as Ella baila por la noche - as seh dances through the night
cantando canciones - singing songs
hablando por la musica - talking through the music

Yo miro mientras ella baila - I watch while she dances
bailando por la noche - dancing for the night
Yo no voy a la ella - I do not go to her
Yo hablo se llama - I speak her name

Pero baila cansado - but she dances sadly
en la luna bonita a noche - in the beautiful moon at night
Yo escucho por la cancion - I listen for her song
Yo escucho por la noche - I listen for the night




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Re: Baja y Bonita (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 11:24:58 PM AEST
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i would say you did good with this. you just did a typo with seh instead of she for one part though. and with, i think, its present progressive you need to have the conjugated form of estar along with the verb, such as esta bailando. i liked how you gave the translation right after it also. i would also say that cansado somewhat means more tired than sad to me, but then words always mean more than one thing. ::shrugs:: el poema es bueno. yo me gusta el poema.


Re: Baja y Bonita (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:13:43 AM AEST
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woah
i understood every word, cause im learning spanish in school but you have mixed up the verbs in some parts lol sry iv been taught to correct that sort of stuff cause im forever making the same mistake neways bak 2 da poem i thought it was beatiful wel done keep it up!!
jenni
xxxx


Re: Baja y Bonita (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 09:13:41 PM AEST
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oh, i see... es bonita write... lol. (your use bonita... not the actual! lol) really, it's a good write. not a perfect paper (correct some of mess-ups and maybe), but it's still bonita. lol. good write, kc, keep up the good work!

~sprints


Re: Baja y Bonita (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 12:25:45 PM AEST
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aah... (with spanish accent)
gracias mi amiga mejor. tu estas magnifico.

*sticks out tongue*
jenny




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