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[aid] => mick
[title] => Burning the Setting Sun
[time] => 2005-09-24 15:57:09
[hometext] => Just a rough draft of the soon to be final draft... Please tell me what i need to fix thank you
[bodytext] => Burning the Setting Sun My anger burned like the setting sun A nightmare I couldn't wake from. In laughter I could cry burning tears Laugh until this pain has gone away. On the nights split by the dawn I could feel the warmth flee from me. My loneliness is all that I can hear Inside the deep dark of my heart. Was the clear sky a vivid illusion Or for once was the sun shinning. Were the clouds finally dry of rain So I could hear the birds final cry. What froze in my minds conclusion Defied everything I wanted to do. When did my life make its own pain And what I knew was right was wrong. When did life move like a ghost And we didn't notice it passing us. The road to through life is smeared When the hard work goes too fast. In the watery sky along the coast Lies a loved shattered rainbow. Like cold death love is feared it won’t fill the empty blank holes. Under the dancing light in darkness The shrouded earth had no beauty. My anger burned like the setting sun A nightmare I couldn't wake from. On the nights split by the dawn I could feel the warmth flee from me. My anger burned like the setting sun A feeling locked inside I couldn’t free. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Mild_Tempest [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
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