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Array ( [sid] => 106356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bled by Love [time] => 2005-09-24 05:04:03 [hometext] => An interesting poem, I'm not sure exactly what it means, but I like it. It's not me the poem refers to, I just prefer writing in first person [bodytext] => Love watches over me with care
As I slip down into despair

I cried my tears and bared my heart
Yet still in essence tore apart

No words can calm my spirit’s scream
I’m overcome in Nightmare’s dream

Shadows streak across my face
As eyes allude to great disgrace

The pain of living fills my soul
As I give back this life I stole

Blood flows free, unchained at last
As crimson stream drowns out my past

My heart weeps tears, a scarlet thread
A sign confirmed, I’m truly dead

Though sword or gun might stop my breath
My heart's what's led me to my death [comments] => 9 [counter] => 431 [topic] => 21 [informant] => wachumiri [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Bled by Love

Contributed by wachumiri on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:04:03 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Love watches over me with care
As I slip down into despair

I cried my tears and bared my heart
Yet still in essence tore apart

No words can calm my spirit’s scream
I’m overcome in Nightmare’s dream

Shadows streak across my face
As eyes allude to great disgrace

The pain of living fills my soul
As I give back this life I stole

Blood flows free, unchained at last
As crimson stream drowns out my past

My heart weeps tears, a scarlet thread
A sign confirmed, I’m truly dead

Though sword or gun might stop my breath
My heart's what's led me to my death

Copyright Â© wachumiri ... [ 2005-09-24 05:04:03]
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Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by maestar on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:07:41 AM AEST
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well done. very good.

quite haunted I like it.

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 08:21:36 PM AEST
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Powerful. Haunting.

The pain of living fills my soul
As I give back this life I stole

This stanza is disturbing and seems to hit a little too close to home.

All my best,
Ann

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:32:10 PM AEST
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I like those last lines.

Two good lines! Better than average, so they say.

Andrew

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 05:59:02 AM AEST
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*swooned* lol
Raw emotions, offered ever so fluently.
I, too have been in such states.
This is utterly heart wrenching.
Thank you for sharing, I look forward to more.

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:04:10 AM AEST
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Very deep and heartfelt,
I'm sure this tugged on many peoples' heartstrings.

The rhythm, flow and rhyme were flawless.

*Who is still in awe*

I loved the setting and layout of this, too.
Powerful write, a definite 5 stars from me.

Keep writing!

~KayT

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:50:30 AM AEST
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Oh...awesome and heart wrenching emotions flowed here in this poem...
Its very much captivating..Venkat

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:54:03 PM AEST
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A flawless haunting write u have presented us with dearest David. The flow absolutely sensational. You captivate the reader and draw them into reading ur poem word 4 word.
I can relate to ur poem so much. Well done. May ur beautiful heart never weep bloodied tears my friend.
*hugs* from ur fan,
Sue

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th December 2005 @ 10:53:16 AM AEST
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:'(
sad, but the poems full of feeling are always the best. putting your heart into something makes it that much better.

- Beth -

P.S. - you'll be ok...

Re: Bled by Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:07:36 PM AEST
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I find it fabulous that you can write yourself into anothers perspective. I believe it is an important ability of and for a poet, not just to present the world about them in a new and different light to others that don't have the vision, but to be able to be the "voice" for those who can't find the words as well. This earns my respect for that fact alone. The despair captured ... the broken heart, written as if it were you, remarkable.

Nazzy ~

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