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I've finally found when I'm with you.
My heart warms up with such a fire
that burns in me a sweet desire
to ever have you in my arms,
to lose myself in all your charms
and wish, if ever it could be,
that you would feel the same for me.
Your heart is pure, your soul is good,
and I wonder if it could
ever see inside of me
to know these feelings are to be
the true expressions of a heart
that sees in you a place to start
a life that's full of love and bliss,
with devotion that could never miss
the target of a heart that's true
and never, ever should be blue.

Darkhorse71
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Awakening Love

Contributed by darkhorse71 on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:59:54 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The peacefulness that I look to
I've finally found when I'm with you.
My heart warms up with such a fire
that burns in me a sweet desire
to ever have you in my arms,
to lose myself in all your charms
and wish, if ever it could be,
that you would feel the same for me.
Your heart is pure, your soul is good,
and I wonder if it could
ever see inside of me
to know these feelings are to be
the true expressions of a heart
that sees in you a place to start
a life that's full of love and bliss,
with devotion that could never miss
the target of a heart that's true
and never, ever should be blue.

Darkhorse71

Copyright © darkhorse71 ... [ 2005-09-24 00:59:54]
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Re: Awakening Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 01:17:35 AM AEST
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Great poem. You express your heart very well.

Re: Awakening Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:02:43 AM AEST
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I like it. A piece well written. May your love last.
Take care
David

Re: Awakening Love (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:41:41 AM AEST
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EXPRESSIONS, OF THE HEART, AND DEEP DOWN TRUTHFULNESS........ Great write.! never hide feelings.

Brew~

Re: Awakening Love (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 11:41:07 AM AEST
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Very nice poem, it all in the heart... mylady

Re: Awakening Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:57:18 PM AEST
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Very hearfelt and sweet john I love it. I hope you find that someone that keeps you feeling like this. The moments that make our days seem long and beautiful are the ones we spend with the ones that we love, you'll find her.

- Cassy

Re: Awakening Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:45:32 AM AEST
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Well i certainly hope it was much appreciated.
Simply beautifull.
huggs, smiles,
emy

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