Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 14:09:18 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 106226 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => No One Knows [time] => 2005-09-22 12:35:40 [hometext] => i wrote this when i was in the darkest part of my heart [bodytext] => No one knows my pain inside,
No one knows what i hide.
No one knows my dark thoughts,
No one knows the pain i've thought.

I hide my pain with a smile,
Crying inside all the while.
No one can see beneath my skin,
That's because i let no one in.

No one would care if i said,
The painful thoughts inside my head.
I sit and laugh with them all,
Knowing soon my sheild will fall.

No one knows the hurt this school,
Brings upon this lonely fool.
Everyone knows when i've lied,
But no one would know if i died. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 378 [topic] => 13 [informant] => sad_little_shard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
No One Knows

Contributed by sad_little_shard on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



No one knows my pain inside,
No one knows what i hide.
No one knows my dark thoughts,
No one knows the pain i've thought.

I hide my pain with a smile,
Crying inside all the while.
No one can see beneath my skin,
That's because i let no one in.

No one would care if i said,
The painful thoughts inside my head.
I sit and laugh with them all,
Knowing soon my sheild will fall.

No one knows the hurt this school,
Brings upon this lonely fool.
Everyone knows when i've lied,
But no one would know if i died.




Copyright © sad_little_shard ... [ 2005-09-22 12:35:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:43:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I feel for you. Hope things get better or have got better since.


Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by frmpoison2static on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:03:45 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i can totally relate.


Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:22:50 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I come from a similar position, but know there is hope, you can keep going, no matter what happens, you can.


Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 02:11:13 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
This two lines are good:
No one would care if i said,
The painful thoughts inside my head.

Best of luck!
Alex


Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:33:55 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Live with hope.There is caring out there.Good luck, Ros


Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by loura on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 12:39:18 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
sometimes i feel the exact same way...but i never managed to put it down on paper...it would never sound right...always untrue...
i admire you for managing to write it and i thank you for letting me know that i'm not alone...that other people feel this way as well!

best wishes,
laura


Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by sidneyconrad23 on Wednesday, 17th November 2010 @ 06:24:45 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Poetry are feelings deep inside us and the way to let people know how we feel are to write them down a out standing write you do have a gift keep on writing.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com