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..makes you want to vote
..makes you want to read me through
..makes you want to take note

..happens when my word is of Christ
..happens when you read His name
..happens when you think ...whatever...
..happens when He died in pain

..is the image in your eyes
..is with you every day
..is your love of Jesus Christ
..is in there,are you okay

..is your heart capable of
..is your heart, love or decay
..is your faith smothered in
..is your bible saying today

..time can you believe in Him
..time can it honestly sink in
..time can life desire His name
..time can your life really begin

..a wonderful hour to feel God's love
..a wonderful place to be
..a wonderful love you can have within
..a wonderful God -He can set you free

~~~~

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What....

Contributed by inoc on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:47:13 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

..makes you want to click on me
..makes you want to vote
..makes you want to read me through
..makes you want to take note

..happens when my word is of Christ
..happens when you read His name
..happens when you think ...whatever...
..happens when He died in pain

..is the image in your eyes
..is with you every day
..is your love of Jesus Christ
..is in there,are you okay

..is your heart capable of
..is your heart, love or decay
..is your faith smothered in
..is your bible saying today

..time can you believe in Him
..time can it honestly sink in
..time can life desire His name
..time can your life really begin

..a wonderful hour to feel God's love
..a wonderful place to be
..a wonderful love you can have within
..a wonderful God -He can set you free

~~~~

....some questions, only answer if you wish....

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2005-09-22 08:47:13]
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Re: What.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:51:55 AM AEST
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This is a decent write. There is a lot left to be filled in by the reader, this is good.

This is a unique style of poetry. kudos

Re: What.... (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 10:03:45 AM AEST
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Quiet good indeed.
I like your style.
keep it up.
*~givingin~*

Re: What.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 09:25:53 PM AEST
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this poem is of the likes of a beautiful and voluptious women, or a car laidened with
style and luxury that is blinding 2 the eye and staggering 2 the wallet, in other words, it is undeniably saturated with thruth and and inescapable logic, which leave me with one question, what's not like about it? . . .

Ben

Re: What.... (User Rating: 1 )
by kcampbell on Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 10:56:13 AM AEST
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What can I say?
... I love this poem! I thnik questions are good...

Re: What.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Caged Soul on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:38:31 AM AEST
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This poem had so much room for cliche's, but you avoided them skillfully.
I like the way the questions you ask in a way answer themselves, making it a very easy piece to read and understand.

Mo soul fire!
~souLBro~

Re: What.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:30:14 AM AEST
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A really good style to make the reader think about himself. Well done, keeping the rhyme also.
Take care.
David

Re: What.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd January 2006 @ 04:40:32 PM AEST
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Well we know we are not in a millenium, if we think so, just throw the lamb into the lions den, it will be assured that the lion will swallow up the lamb, I click on your poems, what happens, I feel so wonderful reading the truth, and I can feel Him coming through in your words, to me. Raquel Leah

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