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Array ( [sid] => 106207 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just another face [time] => 2005-09-22 03:23:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => just another face
that will fade into a picture
now there's no point feeling sad
and cry over the blister
i pray for lasting blissfulness
i will pray for his happiness
hoping is no use now
as all is getting dull
five years down the road
it'll still bethe same mode
the gravest0nes it will all crack
as another new body is being dragged
into a hole
dug far beyond Earth
far beyond the human race
forgotten, no reasons.
for we can't employ this season
Devastate, accumiliate
the total self-destruction
when will the sky fall down and let us reunite
when will the distance disappear and let me see you again
my dear I miss you so
my dear don't you miss me so??
just another face
that will fade into a picture
just another wish
that will vaporise into nothingness [comments] => 2 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 48 [informant] => glassicallyunsuperficial [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

just another face

Contributed by glassicallyunsuperficial on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:23:07 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

just another face
that will fade into a picture
now there's no point feeling sad
and cry over the blister
i pray for lasting blissfulness
i will pray for his happiness
hoping is no use now
as all is getting dull
five years down the road
it'll still bethe same mode
the gravest0nes it will all crack
as another new body is being dragged
into a hole
dug far beyond Earth
far beyond the human race
forgotten, no reasons.
for we can't employ this season
Devastate, accumiliate
the total self-destruction
when will the sky fall down and let us reunite
when will the distance disappear and let me see you again
my dear I miss you so
my dear don't you miss me so??
just another face
that will fade into a picture
just another wish
that will vaporise into nothingness

Copyright © glassicallyunsuperficial ... [ 2005-09-22 03:23:07]
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Re: just another face (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:32:50 AM AEST
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Not only could I feel your emotion in this poem, I felt I could see it too with the great imagery in it. Very good write.

Thank for sharing.

Tim

Re: just another face (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:43:10 AM AEST
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this is a very sad poem, but it's written beautifully, and I'm sure he would like it if he could see it....

I pray for you, and your happiness

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