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Array ( [sid] => 106189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oasis For My heart, A Desert Soul [time] => 2005-09-21 23:32:16 [hometext] => This is a very simple poem but I think it has alot of meaning well all it took was one thought to inspire it, of cours I was thinking of my girl [bodytext] =>

When the whole world

Starts to fall apart

And I start to fall away

And slip into nothing

Like the sands

Of a desert soul

When everything starts to hurt

And I can’t seem to get away

I look into your eyes

And see that you can see

All the love I have for you and

You smile that beautiful smile

That beautiful, enchanting, charming smile

With that smile all the pain

All the unpleasantness of this world

Just falls away and it is just the two of us

Then you kiss me

I take nourishment from your lips

The buds of my soul bloom

And I am inspired again

By your light that shines in me

Through my eyes and hands

And I can write again

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Oasis For My heart, A Desert Soul

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:32:16 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry





When the whole world

Starts to fall apart

And I start to fall away

And slip into nothing

Like the sands

Of a desert soul

When everything starts to hurt

And I can’t seem to get away

I look into your eyes

And see that you can see

All the love I have for you and

You smile that beautiful smile

That beautiful, enchanting, charming smile

With that smile all the pain

All the unpleasantness of this world

Just falls away and it is just the two of us

Then you kiss me

I take nourishment from your lips

The buds of my soul bloom

And I am inspired again

By your light that shines in me

Through my eyes and hands

And I can write again





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Re: Oasis For My heart, A Desert Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 04:56:38 AM AEST
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awe such a sweet write, i especially liked how you compared your slipping away to the sands of a desert soul, its beautiful.




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