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Array ( [sid] => 106171 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Undecided [time] => 2005-09-21 20:41:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => What is it about you
Something I can’t hide
From myself
Deep inside
I don’t want to know
Two ways to go
But none are wanted
You were my life
The cause of all my pain
If today were yesterday
I might have said no
And turned my back
Before it even started
Once again
What was once
Is no more
Another chapter torn
And left on the table
For all of me to see
If I wasn’t me
Then who would I be
Someone who never knew
You

But what is this?
Something expected
A strange occurrence?
Of human nature
To love is to want
But to want is to ?
A stranger in the crowd
Friend of a friend
Makes me one
But only once
My secrete is
My own worst fear
I knew I would fall
But never too soon.
A smile flashed
A dull brush wiped away
Exploding
What you gonna do?
Sit here like I got stuck
Filling inside
Wanting
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Undecided

Contributed by Pianoman745 on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:41:18 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

What is it about you
Something I can’t hide
From myself
Deep inside
I don’t want to know
Two ways to go
But none are wanted
You were my life
The cause of all my pain
If today were yesterday
I might have said no
And turned my back
Before it even started
Once again
What was once
Is no more
Another chapter torn
And left on the table
For all of me to see
If I wasn’t me
Then who would I be
Someone who never knew
You

But what is this?
Something expected
A strange occurrence?
Of human nature
To love is to want
But to want is to ?
A stranger in the crowd
Friend of a friend
Makes me one
But only once
My secrete is
My own worst fear
I knew I would fall
But never too soon.
A smile flashed
A dull brush wiped away
Exploding
What you gonna do?
Sit here like I got stuck
Filling inside
Wanting

Copyright Â© Pianoman745 ... [ 2005-09-21 20:41:18]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Undecided (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:27:17 PM AEST
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i really liked the ending lines, they really completed the whole idea. i can relate to this poem and i think it was well written so good job and i look foward to more of your writing!

Re: Undecided (User Rating: 1 )
by death_not_be_feared on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:13:30 PM AEST
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very deep i can relate good write

Re: Undecided (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:35:17 AM AEST
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Great Write! Really deep in meaning and intricate in style.
I could really relate to the content and thought you set the scene really well. Its evident you put your feelings out on show for all to see, very genuine and solemn.
I look forward to reading more from you.

Dan

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