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Array ( [sid] => 106166 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stoped [time] => 2005-09-21 19:40:33 [hometext] => this is for a friend of mine who got stoped by my bf from doin suicide (tell me what u think...& if u like read my othetr poem) [bodytext] => Seize my hand,
Guide me on my own way,
Ease this anguish.
When was it that I fell,
Only forgotten instants will advise,
As time pours by.
Assembling strewn pieces,
Of exquisiteness deceived,
Fabrication and tears have frozen so.
And dew drop so pure,
Can never mend,
May never attain the blazing skin.
Within this reformatory,
Spread so slender,
Now merely covering and bones.
Too bitter to the touch,
Mislaid to the graze of demise,
Then your voice engraved this emptiness.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 36 [informant] => my_dark_paradise [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Stoped

Contributed by my_dark_paradise on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:40:33 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Seize my hand,
Guide me on my own way,
Ease this anguish.
When was it that I fell,
Only forgotten instants will advise,
As time pours by.
Assembling strewn pieces,
Of exquisiteness deceived,
Fabrication and tears have frozen so.
And dew drop so pure,
Can never mend,
May never attain the blazing skin.
Within this reformatory,
Spread so slender,
Now merely covering and bones.
Too bitter to the touch,
Mislaid to the graze of demise,
Then your voice engraved this emptiness.

Copyright © my_dark_paradise ... [ 2005-09-21 19:40:33]
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Re: Stoped (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:51:02 PM AEST
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Very nice.

Re: Stoped (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:11:47 PM AEST
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Didn't understand it but I thought it was intricate and vivid.

Re: Stoped (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:34:16 PM AEST
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a little confusing at the end but i think i got it. the imagery is very vivid and brings your character to life, her pain is almost felt. good job.

Re: Stoped (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 09:24:23 PM AEST
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WOW is all that i can say! i reeeeallly need a dictionary tho! lol
other then that i didnt understand soem of the words i really liked this poem and liek wow...
luv, Kortnie

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