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Face Full of Fist

Sweat,
blood,
hatred..
I do,
thankyou

sweet,
bitter tormenter,
I love you to.

Agony,
breathe and resenter,
I wish it wasnt blue..

empathy,
sweetness,
resister,
I see its finally through.

Hot liar,
you''re so sweeter
beauty you''re ridden.

the keeper
the sordid
you''ve been forbiden.

a line
an escape,
a name on the list.

a battle,
a death,
a face full of fist.

Id smash a glass bottle right across your face
then slash up my wrists with the pieces
Let it trickle on your lips, so you get a last taste
blood pours fast, heart rate increases

Bliss..
as your screams get louder..
then
gently...
...slowly
fade away

Pleasure..
in the knowledge...
you''ll never see another day.
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Face Full of Fist

Contributed by True-to-the-Heart on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:28:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

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Face Full of Fist

Sweat,
blood,
hatred..
I do,
thankyou

sweet,
bitter tormenter,
I love you to.

Agony,
breathe and resenter,
I wish it wasnt blue..

empathy,
sweetness,
resister,
I see its finally through.

Hot liar,
you''re so sweeter
beauty you''re ridden.

the keeper
the sordid
you''ve been forbiden.

a line
an escape,
a name on the list.

a battle,
a death,
a face full of fist.

Id smash a glass bottle right across your face
then slash up my wrists with the pieces
Let it trickle on your lips, so you get a last taste
blood pours fast, heart rate increases

Bliss..
as your screams get louder..
then
gently...
...slowly
fade away

Pleasure..
in the knowledge...
you''ll never see another day.

Copyright © True-to-the-Heart ... [ 2005-09-21 18:28:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Face Full of Fist (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:30:55 PM AEST
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all the world is a mushroom blue

great write love the flow keep on writing

Re: Face Full of Fist (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:46:12 PM AEST
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yes, the world treats us all like mushroooms. Feed us crap and keep us in the dark. Some spores do get away though into the light.

Blessings,

Re: Face Full of Fist (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:57:49 PM AEST
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Amazing, can't wait to see more.

Re: Face Full of Fist (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:38:09 PM AEST
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I say based on this poem that i would not want to make you mad at me, if i knew you.

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