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tears staining my cheek
no one to see
heart feeble and weak

no one to see
walls constructed so high
no one to see
i'm ready to die

no one to dine with
no one to share with
no one to laugh with
no one to care with

no one to hear
my lamenting song
no one to hear
about life gone so wrong

no one to feel
my life matters much
no one to feel
my caress and warm touch

no one to sing with
no one to cry with
no one to live with
no one to die with

no one to care
that my body goes numb
no one to care
and no one to come

no one will save
a heart long gone cold
with this loser hand
it's past time to fold [comments] => 4 [counter] => 268 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

The return of no one

Contributed by Jaycee on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 01:55:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

no one to see
tears staining my cheek
no one to see
heart feeble and weak

no one to see
walls constructed so high
no one to see
i'm ready to die

no one to dine with
no one to share with
no one to laugh with
no one to care with

no one to hear
my lamenting song
no one to hear
about life gone so wrong

no one to feel
my life matters much
no one to feel
my caress and warm touch

no one to sing with
no one to cry with
no one to live with
no one to die with

no one to care
that my body goes numb
no one to care
and no one to come

no one will save
a heart long gone cold
with this loser hand
it's past time to fold

Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-09-21 13:55:24]
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Re: The return of no one (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:52:12 PM AEST
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A heart felt poem full of pain and sadness. The repitition gets the point across! Good job!

Re: The return of no one (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:22:29 PM AEST
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Jaycee.

this is sad , I am sorry you are hurting inside, I am here if you need someone to talk to,

Leia36

Re: The return of no one (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:50:30 PM AEST
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Jaycee.

This is a really good heart felt poem. I can very much relate to it.

You are not a loser and hope that someday a true friend and a true love will come along for you.

I'm sure someday it has to happen. She's out there somewhere. All you have to do is look.

Take care,

Tim

Re: The return of no one (User Rating: 1 )
by death_not_be_feared on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:15:02 PM AEST
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very sad i can relate in some ways if u need to talk im here good write

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