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Array ( [sid] => 106131 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Of upside-down world. [time] => 2005-09-21 05:52:16 [hometext] => If you think you have a weight of the world on your head, think again. [bodytext] => When you are down
and all stressed out,
try lifting the weight
of the whole world.

You'll soon realise
it's the same
as that carried
on your own two feet.

How do you carry
the weight of the world?
Just try standing
on your own head.

If you haven't noticed;
the world is doing just fine,
And creatures of this world
are all standing on their feet.

It's no wonder,
for those who carry
the weight of the world around,
their world is all upside down. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 21 [informant] => remote [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Of upside-down world.

Contributed by remote on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 05:52:16 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

When you are down
and all stressed out,
try lifting the weight
of the whole world.

You'll soon realise
it's the same
as that carried
on your own two feet.

How do you carry
the weight of the world?
Just try standing
on your own head.

If you haven't noticed;
the world is doing just fine,
And creatures of this world
are all standing on their feet.

It's no wonder,
for those who carry
the weight of the world around,
their world is all upside down.

Copyright © remote ... [ 2005-09-21 05:52:16]
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Re: Of upside-down world. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:46:04 AM AEST
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Interesting write, remote.....
Jenni

Re: Of upside-down world. (User Rating: 1 )
by Caged Soul on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:05:24 AM AEST
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I like the way you look at things. Sometimes we get so caught up in our own dramas and get totally paranoid, it makes us unable to look at things rasionally.

Keep on sharing your sou!
~soulBro~

Re: Of upside-down world. (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:20:03 AM AEST
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thnx 4 sharing
i usually feel that i hav da world on my shoulders the lies the secrets sometimes i dnt no wot to do
thnx mb i should try something else
jenni
xxx

Re: Of upside-down world. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:32:20 AM AEST
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I've never thought about it like that before...
Good write, very interesting.

Jeff

Re: Of upside-down world. (User Rating: 1 )
by WAE on Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 02:02:19 PM AEST
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Very good point of view.
Alex

Re: Of upside-down world. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 01:39:12 AM AEST
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I like this. It's different. You have an interesting point of view.

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