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Array ( [sid] => 106109 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Candle [time] => 2005-09-20 22:19:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The night strikes down upon me swiftly
Causing me to fall
Into the sanctuary of my chamber
To whom my soul it calls.
I find myself slipping into serenity
In this wondrous place
And as I lay there in a daze
I find no smile upon my face.
This causes me to be restless
As I repeatedly toss and turn
Then suddenly I realize
There’s a fire that in me burns.
Who will help me entice the flame?
Who will help the fire grow tall?
So that I may burn with all my might
And finally, graciously fall.
I thought no one would hear my plea
My soul losing all hope and joy
A shadow answered my wicked prayers
My beautiful gothic boy.
The one and only creature
With hair as black as night
And skin as pale as the moon
He gives my soul its fright.
My little gothic boy
With eyes as gray as steel
And nails as sharp as glass
He’s too beautiful to be real.
His eyes change from gray to black
As he stares hungrily at my skin
I yearn to feel the touch of him
And begin our intimate sin.
As he comes towards me
I feel myself begin to quiver
His voice calms my very soul
And he gives my spine shivers.
He fiercely embraces me
His breath against my lips
As his hands travel down my body
And rest upon my hips.
Our lust has no control
As our lips meet
This is desire, this is passion
This is heaven between red silk sheets.
The kisses become heavier
His teeth graze my throat
A feeling of pure diabolical rapture
As I scream a high note.
We begin to come down
Out breathing slow its pace
The high from out act still lingers
And there is a smile on my face.
My ears pick up the sound
Of a Helsinki vampire
As I close my eyes
Falling asleep and in love with my sire.
I want to stay like this
Where lust and passion does not lack
To spend eternity in his arms
And live like Sally and Jack.
I know he truly loves me
That I have no doubt
Swaying in and out of happiness
And finally my candle’s flame goes out.
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Candle

Contributed by night_goddess666 on Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:19:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The night strikes down upon me swiftly
Causing me to fall
Into the sanctuary of my chamber
To whom my soul it calls.
I find myself slipping into serenity
In this wondrous place
And as I lay there in a daze
I find no smile upon my face.
This causes me to be restless
As I repeatedly toss and turn
Then suddenly I realize
There’s a fire that in me burns.
Who will help me entice the flame?
Who will help the fire grow tall?
So that I may burn with all my might
And finally, graciously fall.
I thought no one would hear my plea
My soul losing all hope and joy
A shadow answered my wicked prayers
My beautiful gothic boy.
The one and only creature
With hair as black as night
And skin as pale as the moon
He gives my soul its fright.
My little gothic boy
With eyes as gray as steel
And nails as sharp as glass
He’s too beautiful to be real.
His eyes change from gray to black
As he stares hungrily at my skin
I yearn to feel the touch of him
And begin our intimate sin.
As he comes towards me
I feel myself begin to quiver
His voice calms my very soul
And he gives my spine shivers.
He fiercely embraces me
His breath against my lips
As his hands travel down my body
And rest upon my hips.
Our lust has no control
As our lips meet
This is desire, this is passion
This is heaven between red silk sheets.
The kisses become heavier
His teeth graze my throat
A feeling of pure diabolical rapture
As I scream a high note.
We begin to come down
Out breathing slow its pace
The high from out act still lingers
And there is a smile on my face.
My ears pick up the sound
Of a Helsinki vampire
As I close my eyes
Falling asleep and in love with my sire.
I want to stay like this
Where lust and passion does not lack
To spend eternity in his arms
And live like Sally and Jack.
I know he truly loves me
That I have no doubt
Swaying in and out of happiness
And finally my candle’s flame goes out.




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Re: Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 10:09:46 PM AEST
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wow what a good poem.

thanks for sharing it.


Re: Candle (User Rating: 1 )
by outlaw_mutiny on Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 10:37:07 PM AEST
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great write i liked it




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